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Hello quick question author. Is it another harem nonsense? I don't read harems( don't care if it is small or whatever. But dating different girls during his lifetime is OK as long as he is monogamous during each relationship. Not some cheating pig) , I would rather know upfront to avoid wasting my time. Thanks.
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Nice title ..nice story.. but the author needs to work on how he present.. his/her narration.. it's exhausting when the me is always confused, thinking on necessry things..there is a simple thing I would always like authors to consider . try and imagine yourself in a situation.. then ask another person how he will react.. you will notice . reality and fallacy are World apart .
I really enjoy this novel so far. It has very interesting system mechanics that I hope will be the focus. Character detail and progression is a bit lacking and the world building still needs a bit of a touch up but we're only on Chapter 32 so plenty of time. Well done author on a novel that can become great!
To start, its not bad written but its really boring to read... There are no real ups or lows that suck you into to the story proper, nothing that that allows you to connect with the MC and fever with him and the plot. The MC himself doesnt really learn things by himself but gets most things simply thrown at him, yes some things he does himself... but the system does the important things for him. Simply put, there are no real extreme situations meaning we just cruise along with no crisis and the like. He also doesnt learn things himself but only does the boring grind part, the rest is done by the system (like getting cheat blueprints for that you only have to collect items and them the item gets autocrafted) As a result its just boring, not bad, but boring essentially placing the story as the kind to read when you have nothing else currently. Although, i suppose the settings doesnt really allow for the required power creep/pacing/increase. But its also possible that my expectations were to high because it somewhat reminded at the beginning of the Legendary Mechanic (even though the two stories are almost nothing alike), a story that took about 800 to 1000 chps to start dragging and get boring (late endgame)
After reading many WN, a rare one that invoked so many emotions from the chapter one. A great story, may feel cliched but a pure original plot and a emotion jerking with deep character. Good narrative quality compared to others at the same stage... I really appreciate and marvelled at the efforts of Author.
Story had good potential but the MC grew balls at the wrong moment. I read the first few chapters and it felt like the MC was brain damaged for some reason. Maybe it was because he had just done something horrible but on the second day he flipped a dude knowing the dude had "noble/royalty" aura. MC even acknowledged that he knew nothing about the world and had no memories from previous guy but just said that he was gonna live his life the way he wants and then gets angry because the orphanage mother dies. Before someone judges me, the MC and other people had their houses burned in a conspiracy. Huge hint about the world being lawless. In the end I quit when the dude just blamed everything on the noble guy. I guess the blame can be laid on the fact that the starting was pretty tragic and horrifying. I thought that the MC will start differently but he followed the same proud yet nothing to show and suddenly system appears. Fantasy with such tragic starting point usually don't go this route. overall the writing quality was good. no grammar mistakes in first few chapters so i don't know about further chapters. that's all.
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