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It has a interesting premesis but it started to get boring as time passed. Mostly because MC is not doing anything. Very slow. A lot of competitions of disciples. There is some humor. Overall, just good for reading when you have nothing else to try.
The many spelling and grammar problems prevents it from going higher than 3 stars the story is great, keep it up but try to edit .
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Love the concept hope the novel turns out great. Try not to fall for the trap of writing a harem novel. Good luck and keep up the good work.
Read the first 15 chapters , pretty good start so far . Gonna keep following it to see where the story is going . Also is he only gonna have female disciples , or he will also take male ones ?
Absolutely love the story so far! want to see him taking in more disciples, or help with developing the sect more, like personally training a group of swordsman or making a competition where he makes a cultivation technique for the winner (also want to see him start making mantras and combat techniques of at least heaven rank given his strength!) but overall 9/10 world building just need some descriptions on like sect layout or style of different cities but it fits with the current story not to delve too much into details of "mortal" level stuff[img=update]
The further im Reading this novel the more i enjoy it while being a little slow the world building and character development is top great work👍🏼
Good translation and many chapters but incredibly boring to read. I tried to give it a shot but listening to MC endlessly walking around and boring sidecharacters taking up time is killing me. A normal chapter is litteraly him walking somewhere, sidecharacter (WHO IS DAT??!, infodump, him walking back again, fin.
Bro I think you might wanna slow down The sect's Expansion a little bit. As the disparity between MC and others are too much. I think they should Slow down and increase their overall Cultivation. They don't even have enough Domain Realm cultivators.
It was good but got borring after chapter 70+
Could have been better, but the author failed to take full advantage of his own storyline. Slow progress... Disciples don't respect their own master, it's sad. MC is kind of an idiot (for me at least). The novel starts with MC being a nascent soul realm expert, but doesn't give him the status and respect he should have (from his own disciples and others). World background fails to meet my expectations. The armour plot is almost flat (initial 200+ chapters at the very least). It kind of becomes draggy later on. There are more cons, I can't explain everything.
one of my favorite xianxia novel I've read. Ngl, people can write xianxia novel and I am for it
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Wouldn't it help the flying sword sect if the sect master and Xuan use their sword domain or DAO increase the strength of flying sword and becoming sword sect sacred ground