Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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EVERYTHING IS GOOD BUUUUT THERE IS ONE THING YOU SHOULD DO BETTER AUTHOR AND THAT IS MOOORE CHAPTERS. WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

over all nice start... but it seem like u don't have plot or ideas wht to write 😑 cause in one chptr u only include a little to nothing...like last one I read mc pick up the herb and than u introduce a two char which was out of flow a bit nd there is no excitement in reading ch like this...or any anticipation... so I suggest u should chech other novels or take reference frm it...there is one novel..my diciple all are villain...

The MC is not a brain dead, arrogant POS so that is a great start. The story so far is good. Reminds me of the start of Arrogant Young Master Template or HN1F in a general sense. Looking forward to more chapters as it is early days yet!

Nice story. A different cocept where the system asks to train his disciples till they become gods.hope that the mc will also grow stronger with his students and nit stay weak.

Just started reading but can say it got potential to be a really good one of that depends on update speed haha ok will review again if any changes[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I've read up to 28 chapters and I'm liking it. the mc is transmigrated in a cultivation world as a nascent soul expert and must take disciples to advance in cultivation. I hope the story stays free

A great novel. It is still keeping my attention with it's writing style and story development. I didn't saw any grammatical error while reading. So, Keep going Author.

The story is quite good so far, I'm hooked at it for the first time but then there was a problem. It was to short, I mean there wasn't that much chapter for now, I really like it and it is so amazing. Good luck to the author and I hope there will be more chapters!!!

It is too early to write a review on this novel given there is 20+ chapters. I can tell that this is a good plot for now. This book needs a proofreader to fix misspelling words.

It's still young, but it shows great promise. Especialy the narrative, I like the fact that multiple perspectives guide the story. You're doing great so far, so keep it up. Ah, but don't work too hard.

After reading all currently available chapters(21), I am pleasantly surprised with how good this novel is. I've never been one to read long detailed reviews so I will just sum up some of the things i enjoy about this novel. ∙ Grammar is better than 90% of the novels on this site. ∙ The readability feels very smooth and does not feel like any one thing is being dragged out nor that anything interesting is being skipped out on ∙ While a system novel, the MC is not blinded by it and can think for himself while the system gives him goals. ∙ The MC is a reincarnator who fully integrated with the original hosts memories which means he's not an idiot about the world and doesn't know a thing about it. ∙ MC starts out strong so we can go directly into the premise of the story, which is training disciples

This book is so good compared to other teaching novel like Library of heavens path and blahblah. He actually teach his diciples and i like ita slice of life

So far so good. Don't really have much to complain aside from it being a bit of a slow burner? (though that's not rly a bad thing). I'm also just really glad that I found a novel that has decent writing and won't give me a headache every chapter, but that's just me being a grammar critic. I'm quite fond of stories with an op mc having disciples because the first ever wuxia novel I read was Library of Heaven's Path with a similar concept. Stuck through 2k chapters and while I did enjoy it for the most part, it bummed me out a bit when the students weren't involved as much with the Mc's journey as I thought? Like yes they were THERE and achieved great things but it felt like the author would brush them aside a lot, kind of like props that just hung around the Mc and only moved when the situation called for it?(and even in the end we didn't get a proper resolution. Mc got married and became the Supreme emperor but what about his students who literally left everything behind - even when they themselves were rulers of their own groups - to follow him ascend to a higher world? Did they get married and have kids of their own too? Not to mention they left their families behind while Mc at least got to bring his parents) So for this story I'm hoping that the students growth will have actual impact to whatever next will happen and that they won't fade into the background after their "arc" ends If that makes sense. Granted the vibe so far is relaxed and it doesn't seem like the Mc has to go on a long adventure (yet) where he has to bring his disciples with him so I might not have to worry much. But if it ever goes that route and the plot becomes more complex for whatever reason, just please don't push the students aside. Lmao that's literally my only concern right now. But yeah those are my thoughts. Keep up the good work 👍

i love the synopsis so i'll give this 5 stars first as it made me excited to read this but i'm kinda unreasonble kind of reader so no matter what reason it is please MORE chapters.. as i saw the chapters weren't enough for me 😅😅

Ohhhhhhh, I love this novel. Where the MC did not force anything to the story, his disciple skills, but just going by the flaw. The system only gave a major quest and side quest which to accept talented people but it letting MC to be its slave. Go on, author. Let me see what this novel can offer me or us in a long run. Support!!!

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This is one of those novels where the author doesn't just focus on the MC, but also on the side characters. And I don't like it. Maybe if the other characters were interesting or something but they are honestly not. I liked how at the beginning the MC was using his system to get stronger and evolve, why would I want to read about the experience of side characters and what they are doing? So I simply skipped those chapters. Unfortunately things got worse as the MC started to receive rewards from his own system to give to his students so they can get stronger, and that's for me was the most stupidest thing. Why nerf your own MC and empower side characters???? Overall, the feeling I received from this novel is that it focuses way too much on slice of life instead of cultivation, also too much cheap comedy in my opinion.(His own disciple doesn't talk to him with respect too) And the slow pace of progress was so agonizing I literally skipped chapters just to move on with the plot.. I would say this here is someone Western trying to copy the writing style of Eastern cultivation novels and he wasn't successful at all... Honestly the only good things in this novel is the fact the world building was done excellently and logically and the grammar was without any mistakes that I could find.