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I love the book so much. The plot is amazing and runs smoothly. I just hope they arrest all the bad guys. The ML is awesome even though heās blind. However, heās smart, brave, and a great hero and friend. Heās an army guy, so heās perfect. I hope he could regain his sight back. The FL is brave and badass. Great chemistry between the ML and FL. I would refer this book to any patient reader.
I am in so so so so much with this story! The prologue alone had me hooked right away and when we were introduced to Bai Lin and Xin Lei and OH MY GOD.... I could only praise the author for sketching them like this... I was rooted to the story right away... had to force myself to stop to leave a review and sleep cuz it's way past midnight for me.... Though I had to accept that it's kinda hard to get attached to the character again when POV jumps from one character to the other... but I am willing to read it further because the story is just amazinggggggg ā¤ā¤ā¤
Author I still haven't read the story but I trust you because I simply loved your other novel" because I simply love you" And I love mystery crime and romance but still am more focused towards the dark side so my family call me a psycho even though all I want to do is help people out from that dark side. I am really happy you are writing this genre as there are not many. Hope you don't drop this ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
I love the story line just sad that updates are too slow. Make it faster dear author pleeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Read the first few chapters before this review and I must admit that it's good. Still unclear about a few things, which I believe would become clearer as I read further and the description gives a nice image. Grammar is done well, as nothing seem out of place so far and the plot is a curious one. Nice work!
Currently finished reading Chapter 5, spellings and grammars all checked out fine, and the novel is very engaging and easy to read. The author also updates regularly and responds to reader's questions.
The writer knows exactly how to keep readers anxious, the suspense the fine use of grammar everything about the book is just too good. If you're looking for something that'll keep you on your toes from the very first word, then this book is definitely what you need.
The story is awesome and the plot is very interesting.... The story development is also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. There are no grammer issues and I like it. Keep up the good job dear author.
The descriptive parts have been written very nicely. Also the plot and the storyline, it kept me engaged while continuously reading till the end. I don't have any complaints whether grammatical or any other.
Engaging story. I have no really complaints neither about the grammar or your writing style which at least on my opinion looks pretty solid. I see why some people complained about point of view changes I got the same problem in my first novel... Some people like it, some people don't, but it is not something to penalize you on. Good luck author.
Sweet read. Your style of narration is totally something I can learn from. The characters are well thought out and compelling. Super nice story
Enthu, the book is great. Nice premise, excellent setting. I like the action! It is pretty fast paced. Keep updating and wish you all the best! Also the POV... you know it:)
Read up to chapter 10 before leaving a review, so this speaks more to my initial reactions: I must admit that I'm not personally a fan of switching between point of views, but I think you definitely did what you could to make it work. However, it was a bit confusing to keep track at times since I hadn't expected it if you hadn't noted in the author's note. Also, this was more of a personal first impression, but the usage of single quotes and double quotes to denote thoughts was a bitttt confusing initially. But other than those two points which were entirely personal opinion (please take with like a cupppp of salt like not even a pinch of salt), I liked the pacing and the dynamics.
Engagin plot with intersting characters and added drama to.l keep the readers hooked! Cant wait to know more. Please update enthu šš don't miss out on this gem ā¤ļø
You have done a good job in setting up the mystery and plot is interesting. Although the switch in pov's is a little confusing at times. But overall a gripping plot. š
Great work author... I love the way you carry the story line... I am looking for more chapters... Hope your novel get millions of views and massive votes ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Awesome. This is a really good book and the title page is good even though it's not yours. The first chapter in the book really captivated my attention. Keep up the good work author.š
Well done author. The story is very intriguing and got me into it at the first read. You have the skill to hold your reader's interest. The quality of writing, character description and plot is top-notch. Definitely worth a read. Thank you author for a wonderful book.