Reviews of Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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last chapter, you are one of the best authors so far that I have been following, unfortunately I will be stopping reading on the webnovel because they are not allowing you to read, only in the app lol, but they do not support portuguese (I read using google translator ) so I hope that if one day you post your work on another site, you can leave a warning on your profile or anything like that, thank you, until next time, good luck.
This is by far one of the best one piece fic ever! I can't put all my excitement into words, hope Rob will have more devil fruit like the Paw-Paw Fruit, Fish-Fish Fruit, Model: Azure Dragon, he'll litterally become the strongest being in the world, along with his loved ones, since he saved the Donquixote family, hope he'll have his own powerful organization/family of pirates that controls the underworld, he can even steal the Baroque Works idea and give himself the underworld name of 'Hades' . Love this story, giving the author and this story my love!!
It's pretty good fic. I haven't found aby serious problems in grammar, it's pleasurable to read due to English actually being mostly correct. (I can't be sure about few things that sounds wrong to me, but I'm not good enough in English to actually say whatever they are correct or not.) Idea isn't original, but hey, I can't do much about this. It's impossible for everyone to make something completely unique, and this is fanfic. So that still gets pass here. Overall, after about 30-something chapters, as long as it isn't dropped, it should be good read, that I would rate 7/10.
Basically two stories in one if you remove the manga part if the story it just a generic one piece power fantasy which is not bad in my opinion but just that I read so much of it that it’s gotten boring to me but the manga part is interesting in my opinion but the story could have been more interesting if the MC worked in the shadows you know an enigmatic entity spreading this around knowing the future and in my opinion the system did should not give him strength abilities but stealth abilities to keep his identity but that is just my opinion.
