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last chapter, you are one of the best authors so far that I have been following, unfortunately I will be stopping reading on the webnovel because they are not allowing you to read, only in the app lol, but they do not support portuguese (I read using google translator ) so I hope that if one day you post your work on another site, you can leave a warning on your profile or anything like that, thank you, until next time, good luck.
first time leaving a review, I love this fanfic. 😍 I find the reaction of the characters really relevant. the only negative it would be I.M. but I guess it was unavoidable.
love it ,amazing work , don't drop it . . . . . . .. .. .... . . .. . . ... . ..... . .. .. .. .. . . . .. . .
there's a bit of a problem tho, you're gonna have to finish one piece by yourself if Oda stretches it more sjsjnsnsnsnsnsnsmsmsmsmsnmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I won't mention all those mature reader's thoughts, but only say one thing and that is.... This was an absolutely marvelous experience for me.... I hope author, you can write more episodes. I am eagerly waiting for the Marineford war arc and the public reaction on it...
love the fanfic....and as for my current favourite character I'll say its Imu the dragon queen and I was just wondering if MHA is going to be broadcasted later in the story
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This is by far one of the best one piece fic ever! I can't put all my excitement into words, hope Rob will have more devil fruit like the Paw-Paw Fruit, Fish-Fish Fruit, Model: Azure Dragon, he'll litterally become the strongest being in the world, along with his loved ones, since he saved the Donquixote family, hope he'll have his own powerful organization/family of pirates that controls the underworld, he can even steal the Baroque Works idea and give himself the underworld name of 'Hades' . Love this story, giving the author and this story my love!!
It's pretty good fic. I haven't found aby serious problems in grammar, it's pleasurable to read due to English actually being mostly correct. (I can't be sure about few things that sounds wrong to me, but I'm not good enough in English to actually say whatever they are correct or not.) Idea isn't original, but hey, I can't do much about this. It's impossible for everyone to make something completely unique, and this is fanfic. So that still gets pass here. Overall, after about 30-something chapters, as long as it isn't dropped, it should be good read, that I would rate 7/10.
LOVE THIS STORY, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Best one piece fanfic…captures the true essence of one piece fanfic …loved every chapter of it …honestly
A good novel/fanfic with a fun and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing the manga into the world of One Piece is great..................
excellent author, i enjoy your fanfic very much
author yaps way too much about his MC and sucks him off too much but I still read cuz of the manga moments oh well
Basically two stories in one if you remove the manga part if the story it just a generic one piece power fantasy which is not bad in my opinion but just that I read so much of it that it’s gotten boring to me but the manga part is interesting in my opinion but the story could have been more interesting if the MC worked in the shadows you know an enigmatic entity spreading this around knowing the future and in my opinion the system did should not give him strength abilities but stealth abilities to keep his identity but that is just my opinion.
Finally we arrive 600 chapter thanks for the hard work please keep writing what you love 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞................................
keep the hard work please 💯💯💯🐐🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
it's my first book and i liked so much 👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻