Reviews of Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

Hello, your author here, I will put a simple definition of the story here, I already talked in the summary that the idea of ​​the story is taken from the novel "Creating Naruto manga in the Naruto world", the general idea will be similar to this awsome novel, but as you all know, Naruto and One Piece are different from each other, so you won't find any similarities between the two novels other than their general idea of ​​creating the original story manga in the story world, and making future events become more interesting... Plus my protagonist doesn't care about the future at all.

Great story but it's getting on my nerves how he says being the mangaka king is more difficult than beeing the pirate king.. likee you are literally in a monopoly, you have no competition... Its way easier. Secondly, how can he even dare call himself a mangaka when all he does is plagarize others?? This is not how a "mangaka king" is created bruh... Solid story and plot but the MC's goal is a bit forced and also hypocritical and very easy to achieve.

Please dont make this a harem fic...........................................................................................................

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well, this story is variation of "creating naruto manga in naruto". whether is vibe, plot, possibly ending, etc. if youre never reading fanfic "creating naruto manga in naruto", recommended reading this one. otherwise, never read this ff since the plot, character, the ending has been determined.

Why do i fell a Chinese wuxia novel vibe here? .....................................................................….......................

why you had to add the harem thing just why... he have nico olivia... i can't take a story seriously when the harem is there... ............................................................................

The title is awesome and this book is very interesting, but why do you have a feeling of deja Vu?........................................ .....

Ça à l'air trop beau pour être vrai, est ce que même cette Fan fiction durera jusqu'au chapitre 50 ou plus. J'en doute fortement c'est juste des rajouts sans importance à l'histoire. C'est même sûr que l'histoire sera à 90% sur des rajouts et l'autre pourcentage sur le sujet même de l'histoire.

It's a pretty solid story all in all even if I'm not all that Happy with the current development. Stuff like the Art Store in the system, the real limitations and objectives of his Quest aren't really explained or very poorly. For example not once is it stated that he must publish OP in its unedited form only that he has to publish it to the end. Even than he must come up with his own ending because he doesn't know the Original ending at the time of his Death. So it stands to reason that he could have just edited the Infos of for the example little garden to protect the Giants among other things. Would also make for a more interesting story. The Publishing of Attack on Titan makes little sense and is Pretty OC for his established Character and his other works, stuff like Toriko or so would have worked better. The Quality is ok, there are a bunch of errors and sentences that sound wrong but it's nothing that would stop you from understanding anything. The biggest danger for the story is that the MC is so limited in his actions in terms of his main ability that it get pretty repetitive. He releases a new Chapter of a Manga or Anime, people go nuts, the Government reacts, a bit of filler and repeat. No editing the story's, no interesting Powers get gains, no fun stuff he gets from the Manga to teach people how to use Chakra or so. After 178 chapters of him basically only setting up shops and spreading chaos with his story's it get kinda boring to be honest.

premise and idea is top notch, but it falls in execution. the power level fluctuate so much, basically it will always be around qhere it's beneficial for the story. i just wish the author slow Down and not just jump from a juicy part to another.

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A good novel with a smart and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing manga into the OP world is brilliant. Keep doing great work and good luck.

i hope this book will end after 2000 chp ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Absolutely loved this one. The concept and execution was perfect. I especially enjoyed the interaction between characters. Thanks for this masterpiece.

It's a great novel, it's a slice of life with some twists in the story and superb fights. The idea of introducing anime and manga is also great. Overall, it deserves a rating of 4.6. Keep doing a good job.

Amazing book so far. Would love to see how you handle Alabasta arc. That arc airs too much dirty laundry of the WG and The ponglyph with location of Pluton should be the spark which starts the War with World Government.

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