This is great! Although I rarely read military works, this drew me in lol. The issue with this is the punctuations and spacing. Like I said in chapter one, u don't put full stops were they are meant to be and the same could be said for the commas. Also, try paragraphing your works. Sometimes, a long paragraph just distracts the reader and makes them lost. All in all, this is a great novel🥰
Here u go readers and authors! I higly recommend this book to all of you as the author puts all his love into it. The description is very well written as well as the characters and world development. It was such a good read for me and I hope u give this a try! It's another masterpiece!❤❤❤ Lovelots, Cie-Lbitch(Ciieee<3)
Awesome! The synopsis, cover, language they are all mind blowing. The stories are so well written it makes you keep reading all the time. The descriptions in the first one are so meticulously crafted that I actually, effortlessly pictured everything happening before my eyes. This is such a great piece of work. Highly recommended one. The author is doing a great job! Cheers to the author!
I still haven't read any military genres but I can say this one won't disappoint me and I am right! The stories are pretty amazing and interesting. The characters have their own different traits and it's pretty amazing enough for me since it's hard to write different characters with different personalities. Kudos to the author who came up with this idea! Highly recommended! Even if you're not into the war/military genre, you should give this one a shot!
This is one of the first military books I've ever read, voluntarily, and I was blown away. This book really solidified the genre for me, and I've fallen in love with the superb vocabulary usage, descriptive language, and the story as a whole. If your debating on reading this, or even if you wouldn't normally read something military-related, I can promise that you'll love this book! I can't wait to keep reading.