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deleteed010

Author: AMonarch
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histo_shizuka
histo_shizukaLv1

This story has great potential. I honestly feel awful for Arthur, he always seems to pull the shorter straw! Arthur keeps to himself, but holds a strength like no other. This author’s writing is descriptive and portrays a world of magic and a tale of revenge effortlessly. Great job here! I’d check it out. :)

Saint_Grey
Saint_GreyLv2

The author has written an excellent piece. Scenes are well-explained, and there are some amusing moments. We'll crafted suspense at the end of each chapter, the author certainly understands how to pique the reader's interest. The update stability is also a significant plus for this book. I would definitely recommend it to anyone else.

Gaburieru
GaburieruLv3

Very impressed with the authors captivating choice of words. Well done. An amazing story with an even more amazing author! Congrats on an amazing story!

Haru_Catty
Haru_CattyLv3

I love the characters. Arthur is very interesting and keeps you hung by a thread. I would like to know more about him. The writing style is very impressive and I enjoyed reading it. It's a hidden gem yet again, go read it for yourself to find out! Best of luck for the author!!

Nora_Star
Nora_StarLv13

The world inside the novel was built with great care, the story if fast paced and really great for a platform like Webnovel, Arthur -the MC- is SUPER OP but the author makes sure it only adds to his difficulties, I loved that. All in all, it's something I'd like to see as anime, hopefully someone might give it an adaptation! Sending this thought to the universe, so there you go! Think about me when that happens author sir :D

safa_bukhari
safa_bukhariLv2

I love your story name it is unique. the book cover is also good. the plot is well managed. The arrangements of characters are superb. keep it up waiting for the next.

TheSuccessor
TheSuccessorLv2

This book's description is on point. The way it moves is very cool and I really like it. If you keep writing like this, you'll get somewhere.

MatildasBT
MatildasBTLv1

A good book with an interesting magic system. The protagonist has quite an interesting power, which helps him in learning magic. In the first 10 chapters his path will be more or less set as he manages to get a new magic teacher. Good work, I will continue reading your book.

Juliet_Omuadona
Juliet_OmuadonaLv4

My interest was picked the minute I read the first chapter. The narration makes the story easy to follow. I do not like to read about magic but this is fascinating.

SMwrites
SMwritesLv1

The story is very interesting and the writing builds the scenes very effectively. I am a bit confused by the council's motivations though. They want to build the boy to his full potential but despised his parents for having reached their potential. Seems very contradictory. Aside from that, the story telling, world building, scene building was all very well done.

Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11

An excellent start love the characters loved the first chapter and the other chapters too, I love the pot the updating stability is Ok and I'm jealous to say I love your work Author 🙈

empressblackrose09
empressblackrose09Lv4

Reveal spoiler

Photosphere
PhotosphereLv13

Although it can be considered a generic premise, I like the execution and the anti-climatic moment in which he defeated the other guy in the first chap; it got me totally out off guard, and it got me hooked to read more which is an excellent sign. Great story and I hope you continue to develop it, my only advice would be to be careful with the length of your paragraphs, otherwise the quality is truly outstanding.

Jgewriter
JgewriterLv2

The novel's a great read, however everything escalates at the chapters onwards of 10s, when a character's true goal gets revealed, why they did a certain action. There were also multiple instances heart pounding suspense as you saw the magic system truly unfold before your eyes. The author knows when to reveal information and when to hide it. The main character is incredibly interesting I.M.O, his actions speak far louder than his few words, his past is shrouded in mystery, yet it affects him in a way where he sometimes "crosses the line". (A good thing in this context)

Ramirys
RamirysLv13

If you are a fan of overpowered MC’s and comedy, you will surely enjoy this novel. Just from the authors review you can tell he is good at being funny, but that further solidifies by the end of the 1st chapter. So far I have enjoyed the novel and will most likely continue to read it.

Phoenix_10
Phoenix_10Lv11

This book is a good find. The writing style is stable and it has an understandable plot. The author also has a way of bringing his readers along. Also, it has a very stable updating flow. All in all, a good book.

curiosity_of_a_cat
curiosity_of_a_catLv1

better than expected, I thought gonna be another so so novel, but it was worth my time. try read and I'll promise it won't disappoint you. it's worth a try. All the best author

Sei1997
Sei1997Lv4

Not gonna lie, it's the no harem tag from the author that made me try this novel, and I was glad I did. I like magic-related stories. And MC is also agreeable, I can't say if he's smart, but I find his way of dealing with his enemies/situation cool. My only problem with the writing is the occasional wall of texts, but apart from that, it's perfect.

Surrealish
SurrealishLv4

That was a really enjoyable read. I like the story development. Authur already seems like a cool character, really powerful. I'd love to see the full extent and limits of his power overtime. That will be truly interesting. Great job author. Awesome story, good writing too. I love it.[img=recommend]

Ariel_x
Ariel_xLv3

Quite an intriguing novel, the pace at which the author constructs the plot is so unique and overwhelming. The adventures of Arthur may be long but trust me, it is not troublesome. To be honest, it is likable. Anyone who reads this would definitely enjoy it. Hence, I highly recommend it!