Reviews of deleteed010

Note: Although I do analyze the story very harshly in this review, the story is not actually dislikable and I believe its actually good. Maybe because I am bit bias since it is my own work after all but I still do believe that many of you will enjoy reading it. The in-depth analysis is for those who are very critical of the things they consume so I would like to be as upfront as possible. _________ Author’s shameless review. To be upfront with my work, I would rate the first 84 chapters 3.5-4/5. This is with being a bit harsh as with every new work I make, I try to significantly improve my writing as seen with the difference between my first and second novel which the second one was given a lot more praise than the first one in the comments. An improvement that made in this novel was that I removed the dragged on mysteries which were a complaint in my second novel. Even so I would have to say this work is at max a 4/5 which it gets mainly because of the world building in the story (until chapter 84). If you actually take time to appreciate the vast world in this novel, you would understand why even with the flaw of having bland side characters, I would give this novel a 4/5 simply because of how much there is to learn about the world in this novel. The current world in of itself is already written well in itself however the history of it which will be revealed in the later chapters will be a nice added touch. As for the point on bland side characters, I did not realize how bad this was until it was brought to my attention. Although I had received a comment about it previously, I thought it was some sort of mistake until a I saw a detailed review that I received on it which made me realize a new aspect of writing that I needed to work on. I had received this comment on my second novel when this novel was written to chapter 84 and I believe I have improved quite a lot since then. This is the reason why I believe that you, the reader should invest into this novel since although the side characters will be bland in the first 84 chapters with a couple of them gaining some character development since they will important to the later part of the story, after chapter 84, this novel starts to take off in the right direction. I don’t want to get your hopes up too much but I believe that the story is worth a rating of 10/5 after the improvements made to the characters. Just kidding… totally. Keep in mind that I am not saying that if you don’t enjoy the novel in itself that you will somehow fall in love with it after chapter 84 since I don’t want to waste your time. All I am saying is that if you like the world and the concepts built into it but feel that the characters could use some work, I suggest you wait until chapter 84 onward before you begin to think about dropping it. Of course feel free to stop reading the novel if you feel that it just is not for you at any moment. Upload schedule: 2 chapters a day with 1000 words each as long as it is received well since it gives me motivation to write more and better. Harem?: No. I have tried to write harem into my previous works but they simply do not work with the types of main characters that I create. There will be females that will fall in love with the main character but most will not stay with him forever. Editing chapters: I have reviewed and looked for errors in the first 40 chapters, if they novel does well, I will edit all of them and improve them as much as possible. I hope that answered all you questions but if you still have some questions, feel free to ask and I will answer to the best of my abilities.

Hmm. The story sure is interesting. The character design is marvelous. The grammar and writing style are wonderful. This book has a lot of potential and can be reached to a great height. I love this work. It won't help just giving spoilers. It will be better if you read it. It's worth your time. Thanks a lot, author, for providing such great work. I added it to my library and will read more chapters soon.

Hello, author-nim. This novel actually tackled about magic. However, in the first three chapters that I've there were less likely, even slow, world-building. I want something, as a reader, that would give me a clear glimpse of the school's entire area, and the places Arthur had been to. It was quite vague. Secondly, the paragraphs are unexpectedly long. There are some readers who get irritated with super long paragraphs. The succeeding long paragraphs honestly looked monotonous to read, regardless of the content. Thirdly, typographical errors are normal but long sentences definitely aren't. At some circumstances, long sentences is significant. However, if it can be shortened, have it short rather than making it longer. It honestly made my mind unable to breath. Anyhow, as for the character of Arthur, he was a bit interesting. I don't know what he's up to or what his goals are, but I like him being overpowered (like what I usually read). I thought he was weak at first, but I was unexpectedly welcomed with him crushing Leon with a word. Some other characters like Leon being arrogant, I really do hope he had enough reason to hate or talk condescendingly with Arthur. Story development was fast for the first three chapters I have read. Although it was fast, it became a bit slower due to the long paragraphs. So, props to this, because it actually worked. Overall, I love the premise of this novel and the storyline. I hope to see further improvements, so this would be more cleaner and logical to read. Keep it up, author-nim!

The book has an interesting beginning where we find out a little about Arthur’s mysterious past. The action starts from the very first chapter! Many things aren’t explained right away. Starting from chapter 15, I started getting all the answers I needed to really enjoy the book. All the strange things started making sense. This is a great book, full of action and great fight scenes! The world-building is done with great care, and the way the magic works in that world is logical. The reasons for the character’s actions are also well explained. There are many unexpected twists and turns in the plot. I love that in a novel!

I think that the book is really good. It has a nice pace and I enjoyed reading it. .................................................................................................................................

Honestly, i really loved the whole concept of the story. Your writing style is very unique and i am intrigued to know what will happen to Arthur in future. So keep up the good work author. I would definately read it again

Unique plot and a very intriguing story with a good start. Looking forward to the development of the story. The character development is looking really interesting with an interesting ML. Good luck, author.

Wow! I like Arthur! Such an amazing relatable character. Everyone could sympathize with him. The writing quality is great. The story development is clear and on point. The character design is brilliant. The world background is fantastic. In short, the novel is fascinating, well developed when it comes to detail and above all it's addicting. Good job, Author!

I don't normally add to my library but this story is excellent. Rather is an op protagonist done right with a stoic personality. The teachers are freaking out a out it which is always great to read.

Writing quality is good. The beginning of the story reminded me of a Korean show I seen once where a lil girl found her mom on the floor in her bedroom dead and someone in the corner she hasn’t noticed. Turned out it was her step mom that killed her mom smh. Good book though so far and it’s different from the show I watched since your book has magic in it which is my favorite. Love books that have magic in it.

This is pretty good. The writing quality is excellent. Plot is moving nicely and the characters are developing at a proper pace. Can't really say anything else beyond keep doing what you're doing. This kind of quality is a rare sight. ^^

overall it's good, i can't wait to see more chapters and i definitely reccomend it, hope this kind of quality continues and i can't wait to see how this all ends.

Interesting story with a remarkable plot I love the way you're carrying the main character. Every chapter is worth holding an interest in. A big thumbs up from me and recommend it to everyone. keep it up!

The best thing about this book would be its pace which is fast and doesn't give out too much-unwanted information. And the protagonist Arthur, his attitude, his personality is very charming and funny XD at least for me. Overall this book would be nice for the ones who like weak to strong plots like that of Naruto. Good Work Author!

A terrific start, I must say! And it has a lot of chapters! I am amazed on how detailed the world starts, especially around Arthur. For me, it was fun, fast, and straight to the point!

This book is a master piece. It a way too good. The plot is awesome and the MC is outstanding. Not to mention the writing style. It's great. Everyone should read it. Good luck with your book Keep it up

Writing quality? check✅ Nice plot and storyline ✅ This book is very promising and optimistic. The author has a way with others making it enjoyable and pleasing to read. it is about to hook the readers in.

The novel is easy to follow and the dialogue works well. It’s not confusing and facts from previous chapters are brought back so there is a bit of foreshadowing which is cool.

Very interesting read. A fair bit of mystery but not too much. Really liked how it played out so far. Hoping to get more information about the characters like their backstory though.

I read about fifteen chapters so far and I think upto this point the novel is very good. Hoping it continues like this and doesn’t change too much.