Yue_021
Hi! Shameless author here, I'd like to say a few things before you read. -This is my first novel so there might be some grammatical errors -If you disapprove something then I'd encourage to be more constructive in your criticism. -This is a love between brother and sister, so if you can't stand this kind of forbidden love then this novel is not for you. -There will be NO harem in this novel. -Expect to have a lot of fluff and romance in this novel, so if you are not the type who is into romance and cute stuff then you might feel some of the chapters cringe worthy. -Aside from that there will also be a lot of kingdom and army building in this novel with some actions in it
Wow. The start of this novel is great and captured my attention easily right from the beginning. This is really good and I’m loving it so far. Haven’t read something this interesting in a while. I’m looking forward to where the author takes this novel and I’m excited for more. Expecting great things, there’s a lot of potential in this one.
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Writing quality: Very good, nearly perfect, I can't complain Story development: Great start of the story, a lot of potential Character design: I love the siblings, the side characters are good too, hope they won't be forgotten Update stability: 6 chapters a week is really good World background: We don't know much but the start is already great I wonder what is the different between Elves and Angels?
is kinda annoying how author is as obsessed with Yue as the mc and how the mc keeps calling her Little Yue, as far as i’m concerned ”Little” shouldn’t be her first name and “Little” is mostly used in xianxia and this should be a magic world sometimes mc’s brain just shuts down so he can’t even think of the consequences of his actions but it ain’t a bad story, atleast there aren’t noticeable language mistakes