Daoist_Little_Yun
POTENTIAL SPOILER: This would be much higher. At least 4's across the board. However, in a semi-smut novel, the author has opted to make the MC a cringe, purity worshipping man. Thats why its not higher. I wont spoil the scene, but the MC blames a character for not being a virgin in a situation that clearly isnt her fault. Not cool. Outdated, immature and misogynist thinking.
After reading for 10+ chapter, I simply lost interest. The MC is so stupid and cowardly and the first heroine (maybe?), Aleshia is simply dislikeble. It doesn't matter if her sister is sick and in need of money, she will kill anyone for money. The best I could feel toward her is dislike, no way I felt sympathy for her, just like she doesn't care about her victim. I tried to read the summary for chapters 1-37, but still not found any interest.
Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't see many errors, for me it's almost perfect) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't need to say much about this, the author usually meets deadlines) Story Development: 4.5 (I honestly have my reservations about giving a grade like this, but I'll leave it at 4.5) Character Design: 1.0 (Very poor, the author can't present the characters well, not even his mc, the mc is the most hateful character in the story, even if after chap 40 he has a good improvement, he doesn't get to please me, he is sometimes very idiotic and not in an ordinary way, but in a way that makes him very angry, the characters' dialogues are very strange, robotic at times and emotionless, the way lovers treat each other tends to be too forced ... but with time it improves) World Fund: 4.0 (I'm enjoying what I'm seeing)
I'm actually a fanatic otaku who likes maids more than having three meals a day. And I only read books related to maids. Also, I only visit maid cafes. Of course, I also collect maid figurines. I play games which feature maids and it turns me on so much. Then I'll wear the maid uniforms and jump in joy.
I like this story but the author has a 40 chapter paywall when he at most provides 16 chapters a month. this means that if you are essentially paying for 40 chapters and only getting 16 after the first month. save your money and go with an author that can at least meet their privilege wall with the number of uploads they make a month or you will just be throwing your money away after the first month!
This is an amazing novel especially world build up and magical workings of world. I also enjoyed various hot scenes of mc and heroines, our maids 🥰 If I have to really nitpick then it would be that this novel has a bit too many ero scenes. Like reducing their quantity and adding more storyline would have been perfect 😔 Won't you continue this novel and reach finishing line? Because I feel we are quite close to end of journey and its very saddening to see incomplete masterpieces 😔😿
Hmm... how to say this it is a very unique kind of premise for a story. The thing is first chapter fail to hook on. I still persisted till further around 68 chapters but that's it for me. The main issue for me is the flow of story. The flow of this story is not smooth for me and at this time with my reading list I cannot continue with this. The characters are very interesting though and world mechanics seem to be good but I have seen none in detail till now. So yeah the story flow and character interaction of mc were a weak point in this story for me. Wishing all the best to author.