cutelit4ever
Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!
Well, I will give 5 stars to the author... I like how she made the world itself, and how fun the character is... The identity of Elena and her past, and the situation. The feeling that I thought I already know what will happen next but then it is different. The mystery, makes you want to dwell more, and the unexpected truth in volume one, and the twist. Truly amazing. Although there are some grammar and some spelling that needs to fix, nevertheless it affects the story... All in all, I love it. Ben fatto!
I am hooked thoroughly â€â€â€ First chapter and I am in love with your book dear author. You are awesome, dear author. The awesome storyline, awesome characters, awesome writing style, awesome imagination. everything from the start is perfect. The Lady in red and Elena's lost memories. The dreams she saw, wow, it was great. The way you introduced your characters in the second chapter was the best intro ever. I loved everything about your book dear author. I highly recommend your book. it is must read.đđđđâ€
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