Hi author, Upon reading your work, I was astonished to read fresh words and spice to your writing however, please be mindful of the grammatical errors as well as spelling. Re-check your draft and correct them. I see that this work of yours is really interesting and how you play with words are really commendable. I also noticed that your chapter name is not catching my attention, I would recommend if you would name them base on the chapter's main topic/event. The way you built the world was great too, and I'm looking forward for reading more of what's in your world. Please continue updating and Goodluck. Regards, Glenstonx
This story is so intriguing just by reading the synopsis. I am really curious what that secret is and I can't wait to find that out. I am looking forward on reading this one.
the first chapter, even just the synopsis is intriguing and is well written. i love your writing skills author keep on writing go go go! imma support you~
The book so far has been intriguing. The female lead has some spunk which Is good for an MC👍 I hope to see where the story goes, it's been good so far. keep it up❤👍
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There quite a few grammatical errors in the story but as you keep reading you fail to notice them, in a good way. so In short This story is great and I highly recommend reading this not in a rush, to savour each of the captivating story lines!
I highly recommend this book! Even if there is some few grammatical faults, you barely can notice them while reading. I personally did not remark them until i read the first chapters for a second time. and Of course, the fact that I re-read the book, It obviously shows how much it is amazing and I feel so attached to it. I'm in love with the character Naiah! She is super dope! They way she thinks is just😂. It reminds me of myself and my clumsiness a looot. 🤦♀️ And again... YOU DON'T WANNA MISS SUCH A CHEF-D'OEUVRE!!!💜
I love how you deliver the story from the beginning. I'm currently reading it and now I can't wait to know more what will happened next ... I will add this to my library to get notify 💕💕💕
Wow, it’s a female lead role, I love stories like that. Haven’t read a chapter but the synopsis has made me add the book to my library, I’d be back to review😫
Female lead with strong character... Bravo author...... The story is interesting and alluring....i accepted this mission.. 😂😂....👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
My God..... This author is amazing..... And that's why he has been able to create such a good story. I've started to read it.And I'm looking forward to the coming chapters.
👏👏 Really enjoyed binge reading this! I’m curious to see what’s gonna go down next. Just like any story, there are grammar and spelling mistakes, but I don’t really care because I was too interested in the story haha :) Some work could be done on the backstory; I found it a little hard to keep up at times. Sometimes flashbacks weren’t defined clearly enough—as there Were a few errors in consistency when it came to tenses. Nonetheless, I really loved reading this, and I recommend anyone reading to give it a go! I’ll be keeping a look out for update. :)
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I love how strong the author presented the female lead, she isn't some timid little mouse looking for a prince to whisk away her problems. The story is insightful, enriching, and leaves you gasping for more. Great work writer, I can't wait to read the rest.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I love strong willed female protagonists! And yes! Finally some academy stories to to go along with the plot. The setting is perfect. I love how the story started out. It leaves a great impact!
The beginning drew me on, right from the Author's note😄. Her anguish is so loud. The chapter one is just so pulling. I love it.😍 Awaiting for more chapters.
Its a nice book ....a daring move to create a story..... keep up the good work ...looking forward to more capters from you !!!! I loved the story line.
Wow! Such a dept of emotions. The anguish we hear in the female lead screams...the author did a good job of capturing the essence of her feelings. Im thinking of our female lead in the lines of a rising phoenix. As said by the author in the preface there were minor flaws, however it doesnt overthrow the plot. good job author
At first glance, I thought it was a detective story because of the title XD But when I read it, boom! I wasn't expecting that the synopsis goes that wayyyyyy wannnaa readd moreeee