I must say, the idea of the story is interesting and the events that are happening thru ought the story just draws you in deeper. The MC is interesting, but i felt like it was missing depth. Yes, we know her backstory, but those vents just seemed like they were too short(?). But other than that it is amazing, would recommend reading this novel!
One of the books that are worth your time. Tha author ideas are mature and real and you won't feel alien reading it. Definitely worth reading :)
The description is captivating! You sure got to check this story out if you haven't yet. I'm always imagining what would happen next. Well written
The story is just great!!!! ILOVE IT!!!! The writer sure know her stuff well! Well done on my side!. I love the plot and the writing about this story. It's unique, unlike everything I have ever read.
Interesting story. The mc seems like the feisty type. I think you still need to work on the story flow though. I can already sense that this book is gonna be action-packed! The mc definitely has a past, a not-so-pretty past that's enough to spike readers' curiousity . Nice work, keep up the good work author🌹❤
The story is really interesting through there are some minor grammatical errors but its totally fine. I hope you do some editing very soon. So far i love your characters, the flow of the story is perfect and i can not stop reading it. You guys should check it out.
The synopsis is catching, I couldn't wait to know more about Naiah, her life and the secrets bound to unveil. The name coded university is unique too. The first few chapters gave me chills. I can only imagine how she must feel with those nightmares. I love your writing style. Among the other things. Good job author. I'm hoping for more updates.
This is interesting as it is, a few language errors doesn't necessarily blur the colors it brings. I love the MC. she's colorful and amusing, slightly detrimental but can still be considered sane somehow XD I'm curious to see how the story will evolve, Good job Author! Keep writing~
Wow! I love it! I didn't expect that I could be so in to this! Keep it up. I'm looking forward to read more! Job well done! Highly recommended!
Just by reading the outline of your book I can tell that it is indeed a story worth reading.... This will be adding to my reading list for sure 😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗 Good Job Author your right on track💌💌💌
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Very very much interesting. While the author warns us about grammatical errors, the idea and the interesting way it is written makes up for it. Next chapters please!
Give it a read guys and show some love. The author has a great love for words and it shows! Can't wait to find out what the secret is! Follow the journey at find out...
Nice work, story line and plotting easy to follow and relate to. Your creativity is amazing so I'll keep reading to see where the boom ends. Good job Author keep writing
I love the flow of the plot and your writing skills. though there are errors but I know that you would do well. this is amazing! it is must read ❤
It's a nice read, which really take you in the mind of the character. There is also a lot of humor in the conversation going on in the main character's head. Definitely give it a read!
The story takes a fresh take on the novels that are circulating. Although there are a few minor errors in grammar and spelling, I'm sure the author would correct them after proofreading.
Hi, hello So. The story is very interesting, I especially like the first chap. The main character is like an ordinary but not so ordinary girl, and overall the story is good. Even if there are several misspellings (because no one is perfect). I still think that it's very good. tbh, i don't especially love the main character, but i love the world she's in. I hope this helps.😊
It is good to see another story unfolding as the one you have created. I cannot wait for the next one to get out. I am glad that I stumble upon this.
Beautiful piece of literature! Captivating narration, good diction, and well-rounded characters. The story grips you from the beginning and never lets go. Kudos to the author. There are little mistakes here and there but they change nothing.