Cie-Lbitch
Author here! Thank you for reading my storyπ This is my first ever story! I am grateful to have WebNovel, publishing my book, my work to everyone! I hope you are enjoying my story so far and I appreciate everyone who's patiently waiting for my updates. I'm only new when it comes to writing so I understand if you see errors like grammars, spelings and all. I will try to improve those so you can really enjoy reading itπ If you are interested and if you don't mind, post a chapter comments or paragraph comments. I will really appreciateβ€β€ Thank you! Lovelots, Author
Hey, Cie. I can see that you put a lot of love in your work. There were quite a few grammar errors, but it doesn't detract from your story. The female lead is also written well. She's interesting, that's for sure. I guess my only question is how does the synopsis's plot tie to the book? I read up to Ch.10, and only enjoyed the flow. I have yet to see anything about secrets. Sincerely, CodeW
Wow! I have read several books and I will frankly say very few reach this level of goodness. It's truly a magnificent story and one I will continue to read. It has excellently written characters that I was able to relate to. Everything is explained vividly and leads to an absolute engagement on the part of the reader. This is a work of genius and a true masterpiece. I recommend it to everyone you will appreciate me later To the author excellent job and we love you for it.
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