NOT CHAPTER BUT AN UPDATE! PS STORY IS CONTINUING

I'm just editing my other paying novels from start to end of what I've posted so far.

gonna do the same for this novel as well and fix up a couple things as well so the story is a little more refined and detail oriented.

I'll tell you when to reread this bitch, otherwise you gonna cry like some sad hoe that certain things don't make sense.

anyway, i mean i want to explain certain technologies while building up certain characters that seem far too plain in my eyes.

this has come from reading a certain novel that blew my mind, and made me stop writing, as nothing was of the same quality and standard.

so buckle up bitches cause i'm about to refine this novel like those overly retarded overpowered MC's from a cultivation story.

but not transforming it into some cultivation crap that becomes long winded and unreasonable.

any questions or specific points you wish to hear about, say it now or forever hold it in your butt.

I want to focus more on the political side and give Lord Vader (I'll drop the Star for the time being unless in a formal setting) a bit more screen time exploring Coruscant.

same thing for the other the Guild President and CEO of the Empyrean Consortium.