Reviews of Civilization
Civilization
DaoistZqipHd
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Hmmm... The start is a bit boring unlike Lords Empire i think.. shame the mc's change in behavior in lords empire is not to my taste otherwise I would've love it more. The development is also a bit slow than expected
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Story. Great potential. By placing the goal of creating civilization, the author has provided a clear goal for the "Player" characters and thus gives the reader idea on the general direction of the story and keeps them hooked. Accompanied by variables like uncontrolled NPC interaction, and predetermined World Events, the story is being given a different flavor each time.Story Progression. It has quite a slow pace which is fine for me, however it seems it has too much action. I would like to see more on the Kingdom Building side of things, Maybe a 70:30 ratio? (Kingdom Building:Action). This can be done by showing the perspective of other characters in the current event, giving us the whole shape of things, not just the front, but the side and top as well (if you know what I mean)Character Development. The author gives chances on different characters to grow stronger, which is to be expected for a Kingdom Building story. Overall. Very satisfied. Am having fun reading it till I caught up. lol Other than that, I suggest the author to use an AI to proof read the draft, and check for typos or grammar mistakes.Thank you for this story! I hope you keep up the good work, and have more inspiration for the story!
I don’t have much to say except THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!! if you want a book that you can binge read for a week or two then this is the book for you. The main character is fairly smart and gives you a reasonable impression of a normal man doing somthing extraordinary. And the world building is top notch as well as the ability’s that are showed or also normal. Overall the book finds a sweet spot when it comes to characters, character development, world building, and system/skills done right. The only con Is that the framer is sometimes funky but not enough to brake your immersion. The author also seems to take long brake between dozens of chapters, but hay I have no complaints as long as they continue to release chapters and hopefully finish the book🙏🙏🙏
