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This is what I've been looking for how many months, to those who like "The World Online" and "Lords Empire" this is for you!!. The character development is good, MC's temperament is also good, neither arrogant and good, its just balance. How I wish that I didn't discover this early now Im stuck at waiting for new chapters. anyway read this guys this is a hidden gem!!
Alright, lads, I'll do a review for this book, for your information, I did read until 75 chapters, too bad I'm broke and I couldn't read more. For starters the characters, fresh, simple, easy-going, I could easily imagine Ian, and the rest, so you wouldn't have any problems with this subject. Next, the quality of this book, the paragraphs are well structured, the grammar is good for me, I noticed only a minor mistake, there is little info dump and you will notice it one a big paragraph, in short, well-structured book, with simple grammar and orthography that doesn't strain your brain, and I assure you, comparing it to other novels you will not have a brain stroke. The plot, I like it, as a civilization 5 and 6 fanatics, I took great joy reading it, the story has a great pace, the combat scenes are enjoyable and short what I noticed in the combat scenes is that it's realistic on away, in short, the plot is good, the Mc has no plot armor, he thinks with his brain. I had a bit of anger when he (the Mc) good some of his findings to his new "Allies", thankfully it was saved after (I won't say as to not spoil). Anyways, it's pure kingdom building with some action scenes, the characters aren't dull they have great potential, the plot is well structured, the world in-game and IRL, is well built, I didn't have a copy-past feeling from it. Worth your time and money.
Hi! This is my first time giving a review. This novel gives me the vibe of the combination of Dr.Stone, That time I got reincarnated as a slime, and the game Civilization V. Basically, if you like reading kingdom building, then this novel is for you. The setting of this world is actually full of potential. Basically, in this novel, there are countless players who are making their own "civilization," plus adding the existing kingdoms/organizations/factions in the game i.e. the NPCs. Then, the author can have a lot of freedom to play out the conflicts between players, npcs, or player guilds. There are more but that's all I can say for now. It's also a slow burn so that depends on you if you're fine with it or not. My only criticism here is that the grammar is not that smooth and there are spelling errors here and there.
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Bro this is a master piece, it has it all drama, mystery, amazing world building, amazing kingdom building and most of all amazing characters. I highly recommend reading it specifically for people who are sick of copy and paste stories where mc is always the best and gets everything he wants. the mc struggles and fails but most of all he actually acts like a decent human being who's afraid of the unknown but also strive to improve and better himself as a human but also a leader. So one's again I HIGHLY RECOMMEND READING
a suprisingly good book with a great story so far, i'll definitely be staying up to date with this book in the future if the author doesn't drop it. (please dont drop this book its way too good to not be finished let alone not continued) I enjoy the writing style but 1 chapter a week seems a little slow so if possible please increase it to atleast 2/3, but if you cant handle that then please dont rush yourself, i cant stand the thought that increasing the weekly chapter count could sabotage how well the chapters are done so far
I found this story amazing (used more than 100 FP on it) and really would recommend it. Great concept . The world background seem a little bit vague and raise questions: how does almost all people that plays this game are in his city ? How do guilds win money (i mean that pay for player to give them ressource but there aren't any competition are they only trading Intel ? ... I still find it very good