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Cinderella and the Seven Hunters

Her name is buried and forgotten in the people's mind, a beauty that cannot be describe, a passion never been seen. She is Louise Carolina Alberta an English aristocrat. Her story can be heard in the mouth of all the witness of her dreadful end. She who fall in love in the wrong man, he who refuse her love. She who will give everything and him who will always by her side but can only be seen in the shadow. A legend pass down about a young girl who fall in love and an apple. An apple that is the mark of her end, and the start of her journey in different lives. In 21st century a young orphan Beatrice Mary Victoria is bound to this story. When everything changes in the full moon of her 16th birthday, a mysterious man named Sebastian told her that her life is in danger because the 7 hunter wants her heart to gain the power and ultimate immortality. What will happen to Beatrice? Who is Sebastian? What is the relationship between Beatrice and the seven hunters? Is it more than hunter and its prey? Or something Much deeper? Is it related to the legend about Louise Carolina Alberta? Who is the seven hunters? What is the relationship of this legend to the present? Genre: Mystery, Supernatural, Adventure, Action, Suspense, Romance, Fantasy Inspired from Cinderella and the poison apples (Vocaloid),Seven Deadly Sins. This is my first time writing a novel but I will try my best to improve and the update will also be minimal because I'm not a person who just write and do not reread her work . I reread my work for like 20 times but sometime often ignore the problem and also I'm still in University and my beloved companion, Calculus is making me busy. Forgive me if I have some grammatical errors, spelling, punctuation and the likes. After all English is not my first language but I will cope up with my lack and seek for improvement. This novel is intended to test my writing skills and also to seek other's opinion so don't hesitate to complain. I really like to add some question to hook interest and curiosity (as you may observe in my description). And the title kinda resemble snow white and the seven dwarf though but Beatrice is much more valiant and really resemble an independent woman who knows when she need help and when she didn't. JUST ENJOY! XD Reference: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mipU2LVoyBA Copyright Disclaimer under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976, allowance is made for "fair use" for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Fair use is a use permitted by copyright statute that might otherwise be infringing. Non-profit, educational or personal use tips the balance in favor of fair use.

Maple_Leaf_Apple · Fantasy
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9 Chs

Prologue

Louise Carolina Alberta is an English Aristocrat known for her wisdom, wealth, dignity and beauty. She has long blond silky hair, blue eyes, fair skin, and body shape, to generalize a perfect beauty. But her beauty is just another aspect because her wisdom and dignity are what make people respect and adore her. One of the wealthiest and respected families in town, she is loved by her parents so much given because she's an only child. They give everything she wanted that's why she grows up being spoiled.

One day she fell in love with a man, little does she know that this man is married. She proposed her love to him but he rejected it. Louise Caroline Alberta felt lost and devastated, it's the first time someone rejects her. She called her butler Edward, Edward's family served the Alberta family for a long time he is the same age as Louise Caroline Alberta and they become very close since when they were young.

She commanded him that She want her lover's love to find the right track to living again, Edward came back with an apple in his hands and he said: "This is the heart of the man you love if you eat it you will get his love". Louise Caroline Alberta ate the apple and realize that the taste can heal her soaring heart. She became addicted to its taste and grow to eat it every single day.

Since she became addicted to its taste, her butler always brought home a basket full of red apples. The town men became suspicious because there are countless of the murder of a man, a serial killer who gets the heart of his victim. They began to investigate, ask every single person in town if they have any idea about the matter. At last, they arrived at her doorstep, and to their surprise, they saw her in her garden eating a red apple. All suspicious came to an end, all ideas only leady to one conclusion. That she is the one who is responsible for all the bloodshed that happens recently in town.

All the rumor and gossip become facts that she who is bestowed with beauty have a murderous heart. All the sins her family commit reflect on her whole existence as a "demon". They who are willing to offer their soul in exchange for a cry. A cry of childbirth of a goddess of destruction.

They erase their doubts and begin to take action. The things they will do is against humanity, realizing she is not a human but a monster.

They burn the mansion and everything in it including Louise Caroline Alberta. The butler returned and he's surprised to find the mansion turn to ash.

He tries to find her mistress in the remaining debris of the fire but he can't find her.

He just found her bracelet glittering in the ray of the sunlight.

Agony and lost engulf his existence, his heart can't tolerate all the pain. The only thing he values has now remained as debris of a fire.

He wants her mistress back, and he will do anything even if it means to offer his soul to a demon.

He who is lost is bound by an undying oath of life and never-ending sorrow for her that is worthy of his life.

He walks the path of no return and forms an agreement to a demon. He requests to revive her.

The demon refused because it is no longer in his capacity. Her soul is also bound to a contract of a much more dreadful creature.

But the demon said that she will be reborn again, to fulfill his desire he comes up to a solution. The demon gave him immortality and an opportunity to meet her in her next life. You and she are connected through life and death, you will meet her and she will die in front of your very own eyes and at that moment you will eventually cross the same path again. By then are you willing to meet her?

"Even if the whole world turns against us, I will always stay by her side. This is my oath of love for her."

A dangerous and bloody path is awaiting her and since you are willing to accompany her I will form a contract with you. After all, it's also my fate to encounter the same path as you too.

A silence resonance in the room as Sister Kate finishes narrating the story.

"What a story! True love." Anna said in a very inappropriate tone that doesn't match right for her age. For she is too young to handle a romance story.

"A true love, more like a horror story to me," I said.

"That's because you're not a girl even though you have the physical property of being a girl," Anna said in a very big voice she can make.

"Hahaha Is that so? Well, I'm so sorry I'd rather live my life than form a contract to a demon, a life of living hell is much worse than death." I said while turning my head against her.

"But he did it for the woman he loves," Angie remarked.

"I don't get t love I don't care about it," I said while looking at them.

"I hate you, Beatrice!!!!" Angie said and she runs to Sister Kate and cuddles in her arms.

"Now, now it's just a legend stop fighting and you Beatrice you don't have to be so cruel Angie is just a child." Sister Kate said.

"I'm so sorry sister Kate but is the story true?" I said trying to change the topic.

"Many people say it is true because the mansion where Louise died stood at its place even now you can even see the debris of the dust and ashes." Sister Kate said.

"Beatrice you're turning 16 this year, so what do you want? A cake or a party?" Sister Kate added.

"I don't want a party, as long as I celebrate it with everyone I'm fine," I said with a smile on my face.

"If that's what you want." Sister Kate feeling disappointed.

"I wish we have a full moon this year, it is a sign of good luck" Sister Kate added.

I wish there is… I said while gazing in the night sky.

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just my remarksXDD

There are holes in this chapter like the wish of the butler to revive his lover but the demon couldn't do it because her soul is bound in much powerful being than him(demon). The butler could just ask the demon to turn back time so that he could prevent things from happening but I didn't write such possibility because he his on the verge of desperation and his only focus is to revive his lover. But even if he will ask to turn back time, the answer is still the same because even though the demon is powerful and could manipulate time he couldn't manipulate her time because it is beyond his limit. To sum it up the thing that are holding to her soul is much powerful compare to the demon.