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Chronicles of a Nobody

A young man dies full of regret with his monotonous life of emptiness. He finds himself in a dark space. One thing leads to another and off on an adventure he goes. First World: Naruto First time author here folks. Just trying my own take on a fanfic here. I'll try to post a chapter a day. Please feel free to post your criticism and opinions on the story. I'll try to incorporate everything I see and make it better.

Hoggysama · Anime & Comics
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Lottery Winnings

[You have received:

Presence Concealment (A)

Flash Steps (B)

Nichirin Sword (UC)

Ki Blast (D)

Observation Haki (S)]

Rai read through the winnings and couldn't help but feel ecstatic. These skills covered up most of the areas that he was lacking in. Presence Concealment is like a dream. Who wouldn't want to be something like a badass assassin?

Rai's chuuni brain was already on overdrive thinking up cool catchphrases: 'You don't know who I am, you don't know where I am and you'll never see me coming'.

(AN: I plagiarized the mandarin dialogue from iron man. Sue me. It's pretty cool.)

'By the way how do I train Presence Concealment?'

[You don't actually. It's a passive skill where you become one with nature upon your thought. It doesn't work when you're in the heat of battle nor can you just disappear in the middle of the street when you're surrounded by hundreds of people. It just makes it seem like there's nothing where you're standing when it is active.]

'Ok. It's still good enough for sneaking out and eavesdropping on people.'

[Yes, but you cannot make any noise or touch anyone. If you do, it gets cancelled automatically.]

'Alright. Then flash step from Bleach huh. I wonder if I can use that in conjunction with my lightning Cloak. If I could do that the speed burst would be terrifying. Kind of like my own Shunko.'

'A Nichirin sword seems handy, but the rating on it seems kinda low. I thought it would be better.'

[Well. There are many Nichirin swords and the quality depends on who is making it after all. This one is just a regular one. You're getting it free after all. What you complaining about?]

'Fair enough. Let's see, there's also Ki Blast from DBZ. It would have been better if I got the Gallick Gun or Kamehameha or even a Destructo Disc. Forget it. Let's not get too greedy. But all these sure will come in handy in due time. They're basically hand crafted to fill in for his weaknesses as well as reinforcing my strengths.'

(AN: Duh. That was the point in the first place.)

'And let's not even mention Observation Haki. I can't think of too many absolutely necessary skills that can save my life like Observation Haki. This thing is hella OP and a total lifesaver. But training this would be a big pain in the ass. I already have too many skills that I am working on. The OP life may sound cool and all but how the hell does someone have the time to learn all these things.'

'Ah. I wish I had access to something like the hyperbolic time chamber.'

[Actually Rai, you kind of do have something like that.]

'...'

'WTF? Since when?'

[The White room stops time remember?]

'Yea, but it only works for 1 hour a day.'

[It can be upgraded just like your Inventory.]

'And you didn't feel he need to tell me about this before?'

[Well, you never had the SP for it anyways. So it wouldn't have made any difference.]

'Still, I would like to be privy to such information. Do me a favor and let me know the next time something like this comes up even if my knowing it wouldn't help at that time.'

[Sure thing.]

'So, how much does the upgrade cost and how much longer can I use it?'

[Well, the upgrade costs 250K, but it becomes a pay per use kind of thing. 2 hours a day will be free but if you wish to extend it to a day it'll cost you 1K SP. And at this upgrade you can only use it for 1 day. So if you want to extend it past one day you'll need to upgrade it further.]

'Ok. And I can't believe I haven't asked you this before, but how do I get SP apart from Quests?'

[Killing. It's quite simple really. The stronger the person or creature you kill. The more SP you get.]

'How much exactly for a Genin, Chuunin and what not?'

[Normal Human – 1 per kill

Bandits/Academy Student – 10 per kill

Genin – 25 per kill

Chuunin – 100 per kill

Special Jonin – 500 per kill

Jonin – 1K per kill

Elite Jonin – 5K per kill

Kage – 25K per kill

Super Kage – 100K per kill]

'-_-'

'Where could I possibly gather the points for this?'

'There's hardly 20 or so Kage level shinobi's in the entire world.'

[You have a dungeon. It's just that it's locked at the moment. It will be unlocked in due time, then you can gather the SP you need.]

'Sigh. Alright. For now accept the skills for me please. I'd like to start working on these pronto.'

Rai immediately receives the information about all the skills in his mind and the way to train them. His sword is also safely stashed away in the inventory.

'Since grandpa refuses to train me, I'll just have to train what I have until he is willing to teach me.'

'I need to improve my chakra control first and foremost. Everything is dependent on that. Then I need to work on my breathing capacity. I should do something like they do in Demon Slayer with those huge bowl like things and try to break them with my breath. But I don't know if my lungs have developed enough to try something like that. I guess I'll go with small ones first rather than those humongous ones they trained with. Then I need to finish merging my technique. I also need to cultivate and now all these new techniques as well. Well Fuck.'

'I guess I am going to do what every Naruto fan dreams of doing.'

'Shadow Clones FTW.'

[Pffft. That's so lame.]

'Hey. Just because you find it lame doesn't mean a damn thing to me. Which self-respecting Naruto fan has not thought about creating Shadow Clones to do all his work for him? And don't even get me started on how much time and effort it'll save.'

[Ugh. I have nothing to say to that.]

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