good plot ,greedy writer....mc and side side side C have more then 20-40 chp just talking with zero info
Good book but with an over-explained plot. Gotta love the side characters. Especially Corey. .................................................. .................................................................
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Cards, card fights, Card craft, Card fusion, pleasure cards I want to read more web novels on cards. My favorite anime were Dual Masters, Yu-gi-ho, and Card fight vanguard. I love this genre. But web novel does not have enough.
all good but the story progression is too slow. it's been 900 chapters and it's not even a month in the story timeline. at this rate the story is going to end in two more story timeline months.
Can somebody tell who the FL is if Aana is not done right then I don't think I can continue to read this .......... .......... .......... .............
This is a pretty good story, just not my interest. Needs the tags drama, drama, drama. So much conspiracy and political manipulation. Was looking for a slice of life action/adventure with some romance. Good luck author.
God it needs a proofreader SO BAD. Every other paragraph has horrible spelling errors or just fully words missing or added. And lots of missing punctuation too.
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Okay. So i just finished chapter 25 .and it was dope. the story is pretty engaging and it made me want to keep reading. and the backstory of a few characters is dope like the author didn't need to go into details about certain things and they did and i really enjoyed it. a few things that catches me off guard is the transition between certain character POV. or just going into quick flashback scenes. these aren't that bad. just slight things i think the author could improve on. but it is their writing style. oh. also like the dates and time at the beginning of each chapter. that actually might help me more if i actually read them all the time. but i do love the story. and i need to catch up before i do another review. as stated just finished chapter 25
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no locked chapers? thats my favorite kind of novel! keep it up, Author-Friend!!! You can do it! also, please don't get greedy and lock your book. not everyone can spare money for webnovel coins, after all!
Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
Oh my god, this just got annoying from a long time ago . Author-san, the story is very good and cannot wait to see where Wiatt will ho with all his romances, but just getting to read this kind of chapters every single day is like reading little pieces of nothing! For the love of god I could jump 20 chapters of this novel ( perhaps even more ) and the amount of information I would be messing is close to nothing. Doing that would be like fast forwarding a video just to still arrive to nowhere. I am sorry is I sound rude or disrespectful with this comment and my intention is not to be so , even less to tell a person how he/she should do things never the less write his/her novel, but common Author-san, this is to much for someone’s patience.
Wiskelfofleelsosxocoelalqqoqodlcleoalsldcocofodlsoddofofoeowowsofofodeoeowqoqlqlwooso, 2K+ CHAPTERS AND ITS ONLY BEEN 1-2 MONTHS ??????
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