jokerblade
This story actually very well written other than the occasional errors(which doesn't make hard to read and is rare), buh best of all it's so beautiful I don't want to give spoilers buh I just finished it and although the ML and FL had a rocky start I could not have asked for a better ending. And also I do hope there will be a continuation for the kid[img=recommend]
This is an awesome story, I really enjoyed the dynamic between the ML and FL. There are some plot build ups that just fizzled without much development. My one real complaint is that this is written like it was the first draft. Or that the writer is writing in a second language. If you can get pass the numerous grammar and spelling mistakes as well as the wrong English word usage then the story is quite enjoyable. Just be prepared to reread to comprehend alot.