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Caged In Finery

Hi! I'm beginning to write a new book based around a few dreams I've had. I know that sounds weird, but here me out! Don't you dare click away. Please ;-; The story will be about twins born in a country I made up, there will be a set of races that I will cover and give full descriptions to. Basically, if you have any suggestions on what I should add or change then message me or leave a comment! Thank you for your time! Read Chapter 1 to gain an understanding of my book!

Kaylan_Black_0796 · Fantasy
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Chapter 2 ~The Night~

They came in the night.

Starting fires and dragging the younger and stronger villagers away in the panicked commotion.

They came for my brother and I.

We couldn't escape.

They put us in chains and marched us down to the beach where they locked us away in darkness.

We couldn't escape; we were bound to the surfaces around us and each other. I could hear a mother crying for her daughter.

I could imagine my mother and father in tears if they hadn't been captured as well.

I screamed and that's when I was taken outside and whipped. It stung like hell, so I screamed on. The giant men seemed to enjoy watching me break down into tears.

They must have thought that I was weak when I'm not.

They must have thought that they were breaking me so I wouldn't rebel.

They were wrong and they paid for it with their lives.

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