Reviews of Building an Empire in Game of Thrones

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its very good, not like other GOT/ASOIAF where mc just conquers westeros and does not improve/ introduce earth stuff

Writing quality /3stars updating stability. /3stars story development/0stars character design. /1stars World background/0stars Overall the quality story background everything just goes downhill and gets progressively worse and worse and worse and obviously the offer does not take any criticism or advice from comments to improve his story and has gotten to the point where he has no one reading his story

Neutral review here The MC is not a planner, that's for sure, He takes out these soldiers not knowing what he's going to do two, he just landed in a new world and already he's walking with these soldiers, which must have different sigils I guess, He should have acquired at least two or 3 of his best soldiers and left the others in the system, they will act as guard while he takes these reperts in the world of GOT, go around and build his story, search where he wants to build his new kingdom, While avoiding stepping on people's feet at the beginning, it cannot build and wage war at the same time, the guy is quite weak and just relies on others, In short, the story has great potential but unfortunately not well planned

author is this novel still being continued or not? the problem is that it's a shame that this novel was dropped, I'm really looking forward to the other chapters

Decir que me gustó mucho la historia pero el desarrollo de los personajes como son las esposas deja mucho que desear y bueno me gustaría que siguiera la segunda parte y hablara más de sus esposas

É uma boa história, perfeita para passar o tempo quando não encontra nada decente para ler, recomendo muito que dê uma chance. Achei bem interessante a ideia de transformar Essos em um novo império romano.

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I mean I don't think he even watched Got let alone read the books the characters thought process is so wrong like in small council meeting he ha white hire let's murder him like the taygeryens weren't the only one withe white hire

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Un muy buen fanfic de juego de tronos sobre construcción de reino, me gusta que a pesar de tener un sistema y tener tantas ventajas la personalidad del MC no sea odiosa y pretenciosa de que todo lo puede como suelen hacerlo algunos autores, además de que no sea un perro lujurioso digo está bien que disfrute pero la mayoría lo exagera aquí en cambio hay una buena moderacion

j'adore cette fanfiction +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

there are many things that make this story great, the characters, the way it drags you in to where you can't stop reading, i only stopped when i reached this part, anyway, the story is very excellent, 8/10 would continue reading, i cannot say much about the uploading of chapters but i hope that they continue with their promise of 1 chapter a day, i would like to see how this story ends up in the future!

people complain a decent bit but it's in fact great fanfic. The book itself is written nicely with only 1 or 2 spelling errors every 5+ chapters. There was only 1 time when I disliked that the author wasted the Mc's opportunity but this was later fixed which helped progress the Mc's army. Thanks for the book, well-done author can't wait to read more

a good story with an intelligent mc, it has a system that gives rewards even for going from one place to another, otherwise it seems like a normal kingdom construction story.