Mike_Kochis
the writing quality is great, but i can understand that for non native english speakers and such it may be confusing because of cultural differences and how they effect writing and reading, thus the writing could be a bit more descriptive at times or with more understandable authors notes updating stability ia great the story developes well, author uses unique and interesting ideas around several corners without making the book too overwhelming, the way a few words can greatly affect a readers mentality is one weapon to be used in writing and is used well here. character design could be more descriptive at times and use more eloquent or intricate wording. world background is interesting, ive only read to chapter 40 or so but it needs to be referenced or learned about some more eventually, if as i continue reading it goes into politics and world history that would be very interesting Over all, a great read
this book is amateur but not bad. it is unique and new in a very oversaturated market. I would say it's largest problem that almost every fantasy novel struggles with is character motivation. he want to be alive but why. what makes him want to really live. also the book can be slightly confusing sometimes. I will re visit this when the story develops more I would recommend as a decent unique read.
This is most real story I have read. It is pretty fun and interesting. Sometimes confusing (mostly system), but it does not affect the story. I would expect MC being stronger as story goes but novel is not finding out what I expect, that I understand and enjoy. Overall this is pretty fun read and I suggest everyone give it a try. Author, thank you for writing it keep it up. (and please tell me what does MC exactly look like, I know he is in lizard like form, but still I am not sure how he looks)
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