76 Update

Well, I have spoken with my friend, he explained some things to me, that he was pleased with how I fixed mistakes that could destroy a story with a lot of study of ancient texts looking for a justification in historical facts, I do not blame him the poor bastard is bored in his barracks, and he has at least another 5 months of mandatory military service.

At the beginning, when we were doing the research to bring this to reality, it was supposed to be 50% and 50%, but it ended up 10% and 90%, since he made 15 chapters of which he only let me edit 9 to make them good or tolerable and the rest are what I couldn't make changes because he said he wanted the story to be like that.

I will continue with the fanfic, but I will make the changes that I consider necessary, like a simpler beginning to understand and leave more settled the personality of the MC, I had thought to make an MC a good amount of reincarnations to justify his military and administrative knowledge and to behave as someone who follows the 48 rules of power and the principles of Machiavelli's prince.

So, I may change the story quite a bit to what you know because of that, since many decisions I based on someone more neutral and pragmatic (within the personality who MC was based on) now I was thinking that it would be much better someone ambitious and looking for power

besides having more chapters deepening information, my idea in the beginning the first 10-12 chapters I was thinking that they would be 20-30 to have better context and development of personalities and presentation of characters.

Because I had to cut events to use the chapters he sent me.

The problem here, I make it clear to you my readers that I still have 1 more year of college before I graduate and this year is the hardest according to my classmates who didn't pass XD, so I will be working with less amount of chapters than I am used to.

Without considering that rewriting everything will take some time, so don't expect updates for the time being

I will be showing you fragments of the story to see your opinions.

Questions, consider it a survey of what the story would be like.

Perspective:

Do we continue with POVs?

-POV combined in one chapter (example in one chapter Robert's POV and Jon Arryn's POV)

-POV separated in fragments and everything is uploaded in one day at once to not generate reading problems (example chapter 1,1 POV of MC 800 words chapter 1,2 Aleksanteri 1000 words, chapter 1,3 Friedrich von Roon 300 words)

-Telling the story in third person

-A combination of POV and third person to relate events from the effects of the characters' POV decisions

But well, it's up to you whether you want this to continue or we stop and just forget about it.

This is completely unrelated to the story.

I was planning to open the donation page that can't be named give advance chapter, but everything collected will be to generate art of characters or events, so the readers will have a clearer idea, examples the cover of the fanfic and MC previous chapter

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