Kim Black
I've written a full critique in the last chapter, but to sum it up: it reads better as a supernatural action story with a romantic subplot than a fantasy romance. The plot and the idea are good, but the execution can feel rushed and shaky. Overall, not a bad story and is quick to get through. If you are looking for action and some mystery, you'll love it. If you are looking for a werewolf romance, you may not be pleased. If you are looking for depth and character growth...this may not be the one for you.