AnnaShannel_Lin
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I really enjoyed the fact that the story took so long to complete reading. some nights I would just stay up reading. The characters each had a story of their own and twists and turns were in each chapter. I am glad that so much peace was found. I wish the story kept going. Overall it was satisfying to read! greta job!
I like the story and the ups and downs all 3 pairs faced are very exciting to read. Very well written! Author, I feel there r some loose ends - What hpnd to Bryan and Sophie? - Emily's father, who was searching for Avery's mother, Olivia's ring - What abt Mr.Black's twin? He vanished all of a sudden, after Mr.Black was rescued by Jackson. - Fiona Summer was behind the accident Andrew died but it was not proved and it didn't hv any conclusion. - How the ancient country allowed Gabby, their King to leave their country and marry Jackson? - Meave and Yuki were captured by Evan's Elite force, then what happend to them? The character names are not correct in so many places. I am not making all these points to hurt u. I really like this story. Just pointing out few things so that u can fix it or not repeat in ur future works.
I have already read two of your novels :you are mine which I thoroughly enjoyed and memories of the night. I am impressed by your style of writing and your characters are very intriguing. There's one thing I don't get though. Why would Leonie be so he'll bent on persuing Avery 's husband even though she was aware that he didn't want her? I don't think that women' s lives revolve around men. This is not the 19th century where women were expected to be married to rich men and walk barefoot pregnant in the kitchen As a female writer please portray women in a positive light. Love your stories though
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