PayalSinghRajput
This novel is really awesome! The story development and characters are explained cleanly without any loopholes and clearly the storyline is very interesting. I am a silent reader (then also I couldn't stop myself commenting once or twice about how perfectly the author have worked!). I can read around 50-100 chapters in one day if an interesting novel catches my eye, trust me this novel caught my heart! Author I just love your work!!πππ Best wishes from me author~!π
the story is amazing. the twist is exciting. i love the scene where samantha opened up about her past and how johnson lovingly accepted everything. and also there is a lesson to be learned with what samantha said about forgiveness. it might be easier said than done but it is also true that we need to give a chance even if its the last. good one author. this is my happy pill every morning whn i wake up coz i alwasy look forward to the next chapter
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Okay.. So I'm not going to write a review here but I'm going to rant over the story.. All the characters are so well made and described that I fell in love with the book.. The plot is also very much interesting and intriguing. The updates are also very much regular along with a great story development. I assure you guys that if you start reading this book, you'll never stop your obsession over it..β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Hi~! You asked for your dii to leave a review so here it is~! Though I only read two chapters, but this is what I think so far. Your narration is nice, and I actually like how this story started. I could already see potential. :) I have a few tips, such as the redundant usage of the word βsaidβ. You may use other words such as βremarkedβ , βcommentedβ , βansweredβ , βretortedβ etc. I will leave a link here: https://owlcation.com/humanities/400-Alternative-words-for-said And I know youβve been updating frequently, as you always tell me that you are writing daily for your story~! Which is good! Even though I am 2 chapters in, I could see that your story is in an okay pace, not too rushed, not too fast. I have yet to read the story though, for more comments on the characters and the world background. I would go back and edit my review once I have read more~! But overall, your story is promising and I wish you luck, author~! Congrats for being contracted! π₯°
My patient are running out while reading this bookπ€ i keep waiting and waiting for each chapter to see some romance and the past to be revealed. Why does it takes so much time just to reveal FL past when it keep mentioning how she got hurt and suffered in each chapter. Ok i get it she got hurt and her past is keep hunting her and not able to move on but it so annoyed when it keep mentioning everytime in each chapter the fl got suffered. Honestly, Iβm still reading this book because i feel that it will get gOOd in the future after the fl get move on from her past and be with the ML. And i honestly getting tire of ML and FL part but Alexic and Martin couple will be fun to read π Patient~patient~~
I found this book in recommendations. And gave it a try. I felt it's normal after reading synopsis. But after reading the chaps I am hooked up with this book. I binge read all these chaps in a single go. Even though the first 2 to 3 chaps are bit boring the remaing chaps are gem. Many original books doesn't portray much of sad emotions perfectly guys. But in this one the author did a good job. And grammer is not bad. There are very minute mistakes which can't even be considered. If u r fretting to read or not give it try guys.
This book comes with so many exciting and exhilarating turns. I love Samantha & Johnsonβs love story. But 28 days for the last update, thatβs unreal. The plot develops some what slow, but once you are have devel ped it. It is amazing. Some parts you drag out to long. BUT THE MAIN ISSUE IS, IT IS TAKING ABSOLUTELY TO LONG FOR UPDATES. Readers will lose interest. You have got to do better. THE OTHER ISSUE WE SHOULD NOT HAVE TO CONTINUE PAYING AFTER READING SO MANY CHAPTERS. Finish the book, itβ time to expose whatever the girl name (Nia) is who wants John son and Samantha to get pregnant. Itβs really time to finish it. You have to many books going at 1 time. You should focus on 1, because it takes tooo long for you to finish a book.
Beautiful and funny vide from the novel. The Ladies- Samantha and Alexi went a very rough childhood due to hardship that befell their parents, but yet they survived BEAUTIFULLY. The Men- they too hard it rough but not to the extent of the Julies. Meeting of the Couples broke So many barriers especially Alexi that doesn't believe in love at ALL. The story development was well structured and the characters are exceptionally adorable,πππ