Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile. And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him. And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar . All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
if you can make it past chapter 10 you are a better(?) man than I. it is super cringe and turned me off for the whole story. good luck to you.
AWESOME NOVEL, TOTALLY RECOMMEND IT!!! ............................................................................................................................
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Amazing story,but there are parts that are a bit cringy but other than that its a 10/10
overall its a fun read writing quality is good just ignore few writing mistakes, new chapter every day character development and design is decent best things is it provides character images
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Esta es mi opiniΓ³n sobre esta novela. comenzΓ³ bien, la construcciΓ³n del personaje no fue muy mala, y la construcciΓ³n del mundo tambiΓ©n fue buena y disfrutΓ© el comienzo. Pero luego el MC se volviΓ³ "Bipolar" lo que hace y lo que dice, sigue saltando por todos lados. A veces ni siquiera tiene sentido y las parodias de comedia se vuelven vergonzosas. Quiero decir, si tienes 10 aΓ±os, puede que te guste... lo cual no es realista, ya que es una novela para mayores de 18 aΓ±os, pero a mΓ, como adulto, no puedo. AsΓ que la gran pregunta es, ΒΏquiΓ©n es el pΓΊblico objetivo de esta novela?.
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Shameless,lucky and arrogant mc but pretty good story Recommended.............
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The protagonist is a boy for the ones who were confused on the synopsis. The story is also good so far, hoping to see more updates. [img=update][img=update]
Autor lo uno que pido es que no bloquees los capitulos mΓ‘s adelante que son re caro para los que no tienen plata CΓ³mo en mi caso jeje pero te lo pido ...te suplicoooooo Es fome ver una novela que tiene ganas de verla y descubres que los siguientes cap estΓ‘n bloqueados y si que pagar FFFFFFF POR MI
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Estou vendo coisas? juro que vi um capΓtulo a mais! fui clicar a decepção me matou porque vi que era uma ilusΓ£o! ai meu coração! melhor livro sobre "reencarnado em um ero" porque existem outros, mas, esse ganha! palmas! Autor-sama continue assim! Melhor livro! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa [img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar]
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