Reviews of Being an Alpha in Harry Potter

This is relatively nice but the lack of updating is kinda disappointing even though I'm one to talk... I'm just saying that your story has so much potential but its gotta have more in order to be fairly judged.

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My only real critic of this would be that MC adapted too fast to everything, whether that be dying, new world, or just killing in general. There could have been a little more development before she goes complete murder hobo.