Alex_morg
practically a po*n novel. of course I don't have any problems with that. but just how long is this going last. j mean at some point author will ran out of imagination to write the po*n sences and that is exactly what happened in the later chapter. Bro just copy pasted the whole paragraph. but again it will in popular for a while as long as people are hor*y. just not something I would spend my money on
This is an interesting thing. It's like a top version of H*ntai. There's no plot. It is a wish fulfillment novel. I wonder how far it will go. Still, it's a bit boring as it has a straight logic. It could be better. His actions would have been more satisfying if he had improved the characters and their backstory.
Feels like one of em time stopping Mangas. When will the MC/God(?)/the world(?) make all em chicks or people around them aware of the immoral things they been doing? I believe the story would be good by two levels if we get some reaction from, at the very least them chicks he been clapping, shock, surprise, embarrassment and such... Would be nice
Ha what a pity... you who had to make other men harness the power of the mc? Well I can't tolerate chapter 29, I always leave my moral concepts behind when I read fantasy stories because it's basically another reality, but the things I can't swallow... maybe if the guys were at least the women's husbands I could try not to call, but that's too much. It was good, but not so much.
Novel is a hit or miss, some will love other will hate it. This setting can be used to lot of thinks, mc is basically "the dark hand behind the wall" he can change how the world work, would be cool to see mc go around changing some rules like "make jail a wargame where bad guys need to fight each other for a chance to have the sentence go down", "make some countries fight each other just for fun while he watch in a couch" "make all the man become submissive sissys or traps for a week" . There's is a lot of thing can be done so i hope Author really make the mc use his imagination making small histories inside the novel.