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Though, the novel's first impression centralise in the romance genre. The truth is that the story represents a modern fairy tale of human flaws. Looking from the lenses of a passive character, we'll see deep inside their heart and desire are fighting against their moral and rationality, which makes me stand in a grey area as the story progresses. I admired how the story bravely digs into the depth of human nature shows how there's no purely good or bad of human qualities without any reason. The narrator made one realise how flaw played with the characters decisions in which the author has executed it in a charmingly twisted way with a dramatic frame. There might be some disturbing parts. But I think it is one the gripping part that makes the story ironically beautiful and dark at the same time. I wonder what will happen to them at the end... 🤔
if you're hesitating to read this, don't! You should never hesitate! I admit at first I was skeptical, I tried to guess what will be the plot in the first chapters but I didn't guess what will it be! mostly the stories are likely you can guess what will be the plot of the story from the first chapters but here it's not! I like how the author put so many details in the characteristics of the characters, I also like how the story develops it gets you to read more and what will happen next! Ughhhh!! One of my favorites [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
This story is a fantastic read! Never a dull moment with these characters. If you like suspense, mystery, drama, romance and a ton of karma situations then this story is for you. Trust me, you are going to need a lot of snacks for this read because the show never gets old. Love this author and I can’t wait to read more ❤️
I read the first 8 chapters of this novel and am basing my review on that alone. Writing Quality: I feel like you will learn how to write precisely with time. Knowing that it is your first novel, I won't go hard on you, but here are some things you can improve: 1) Grammar- you could use a free grammar checker online or a paid service if you like to see where you are going wrong. Read more books to get a sense of how grammar flows. 2) Sentence Structure- You have a lot of run-on sentences. This means that you are either not using proper punctuation or you have long-winded sentences that lose meaning. Stability of Updates: I don't know about the routine but this author has posted a lot of chapters over the month, so I will trust their dedication to posting on time. Story Development: It is slow. But because it is the initial chapters, I won't judge based on it. Character Design: The author needs to work on making the characters multi-dimensional. I mean... your characters are predictable and say things that make them all seem like the same person. I don't see how each character is different from the other. The author tells me the personality but doesn't show me how they are as people. This is something the author needs to improve on. World Background- I was a bit confused by the names at first but quickly realized that it was a diverse community as most global cities are. I will need a little more information on the background of the characters, their lives, and their aspirations to make a better judgment.
I am conflicting about this novel. In one side I don't condone *****ery whatever reasons you had to enter marriage. Also the ML amd his wfie though it is said he was trapped didn't show in all the chapters I read prior to him meet the FL that he was unhappy, he treated his wife ok. And the author failed to explain when did he start to like the FL or why he didn't try tonsearch for the FL food testing. So I can'y vote for this novel for all of the reasons unknown
Warning! Very brutal rape scenes. I didn't mind too much but author, you should have done good *** scene in the book before the rape scene! I also hope our fl does not forgive the fl for the horrific things he did to that woman until he is well and truly sorry for it himself or he really is a monster and I'm not ok with it. Looking forward to more though, this has been a great rollercoaster of emotions.
I'm writing this review just after I completed reading the book. I have a bittersweet feeling about the story and the characters I've come across the whole story Jinhai is too cruel and Nana is too kind, it is like they are two ends of a spectrum. I still feel awed by the author's capability to bring two people with such huge difference in worldview together. I will not lie by saying that I liked Jinhai's obsession and Nana's blindness towards her admirers for sometime, but in the end I realised that is how people are truly in real life- 'Imperfect'. Almost every character in the story had an ugly side. Everyone was ruthless in their own ways but by the end of the day all had their own happy ending. I love how you portrayed the no matter how huge your mistake is (expect for Jinhai) you will always have a better life as long as you genuinely understand your wrongdoing and learn to let go. I love you for wonderfully weaving such a nice story with all these grey characters. I also love how brave you were in showing how not only saints but even devils are capable of love. I hate you just as much for all the times I gave out a frustrated cry reading about all the scheming. Everything apart thank you for letting me read about the love story of a villain, of a devil who only had his love as his bottom line. But I still hate you for making me question my morality so many times while reading this book. I just hate for making me like something which was against my morals. I just hate you, dear author!!!!!😤😡
I loved this novel from beginning to end. LOL To be honest I know that a lot of readers probably think that the ML is questionable however, I supported him 100% and I have my own reasonings why i support him so much. The ML and FL really balance each other out and the storyline is really exciting. I found myself really holding my breath at times during certain scenes and giddy during the love scenes. Although this is one of those CEO stories, it actually quite different. It's got really different elements and not repetitive to what's out there. It's kind of refreshing. Anyway, support this author. Her writing is great. :)