Beast Evolution

Love this book, very nice plot even though it is only 10 chapter I read it is very great[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Nice one blood, this book will be a big hit[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Nice book, I usually don't give reviews but this evolution book caught my fancy[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Fan of evolution novel, I love this book but the author should improve more on the writing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Voting this book all the way

Nice book to read, real catchy beginning I hope to see more interesting characters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

nice idea but trash and stupid mc has no common sense

This is a pretty good book but lacks some world building. Thank you author for sharing your creativity with us, it’s very interesting! Overall I really like it and the world building is easy to fix. However, the price is too high for how short the chapters are… please lower the price or lengthen the chapters a bit.

a decent story but its annoying how short the chapters are and on top of that the author is shamelessly padding every chapter with the last paragraph or two from the previous chapter. we pay for this by letter count you know.

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One of the best book I've read and currently reading, the Author is a newbie but still the book Is great. It's an easy and understandable read, characters are great and the plot are nice, a little cliche but still interesting. Would love to see more from Ray.

From the start to chapter 48 (where I dropped), it's just a successions of clumsy mistakes and pointless actions. I will not criticize the plot as it is the art of the author and, even though I have a personal opinion, I am not in right to insult other's art. I kinda disappointed in this but I can only encourage you to make your own opinions. Post-scriptum: You must be quite young with the way you describe s*x, it's so silly :P. You will understand one day...

It is a good read but it can better. Been reading all the first 40 chapters, it’s good that it’s fast paced and considering that it is a fast paced book the mc has little to no character development. I mean the guy lacks common sense and I can’t see anywhere in another 50 chapters that he will have any development. Ffs he went to a library and read the same book he got on the merchant’s house. Got distracted by a girl to learn a spell then went out of the library. It could have been a chance to introduce the world a little bit more and make the mc have some common sense. After reading 40 chapters it just became mind numbingly stupid to read this book. Idk about the other guys who read this but good luck to you.

Bro this novel is kind of bad so I'm surprised it has gotten so much publicity.

This is a very good story some spelling mistakes but the story solid. I hope it is a long story there are not a lot of good non human MC story that last long and that are not all about getting on with the “under the bed sheets”if you know what I mean so please keep go don’t be put off but the bad review if they don’t like the story then that’s them not you. PS please have someone find out about the MC not being human please.

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all I can do is be amazed at how the story is progressing in a very interesting way.

To the author I recommend that you read this novel from the beginning and fix or add details where it is needed. I understand that this was your first novel that you have written, but it is now at 200+ chapters and the first 80’s are a slugfest. It doesn't matter if chapter 200 is good, if the beginning is boring people not feeling investing their time in this story.

My last 2 brain cells couldn't comprehend chapters 20 plus where she meets a girl in the forest...

this is a really great story and I hope it updates soon. please come back