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(AS OF CHAPTER 33) Will edit or re-review when I read further and see any improvements/deterioration Writing quality: 3/5 Update: 4/5 (don't know since I havent caught up yet 4/5 as a place holder) Story development: 4/5 Character design: 4/5 World background:4/5 WQ: For gods sake please remember that: he, his, him are masculine 3rd-person pronouns while she, her, hers are feminine 3rd-person pronouns. Other mistakes are harder to mention without making almost an essay like review which I'd rather not do... just know punctuation and sentence/paragraph structures are pretty bad. The above are the most glaring problems for me in terms of writing quality. Updates: Like I said above 4/5 is a place holder. SD: From what I read the idea of the story is pretty good and interesting. Honestly I can't really say much on this since I've skipped quite a lot of chapters because of the bad grammar and only skimmed if I found any part that I didn't feel like deciphering. But tbh the idea behind the story I find enjoyable. CD: The MC is likable for the most part and there isn't really any glaring problems i have with him. If I had to nitpick it would be the fact that MC missed his mom so much in his past life and all that emotional stuff but after a couple days he's pretty much ignored her other than basic stuffs and only focus of his training. He only spent time with her bc his system told him too. WD: I have nothing much to say at this point of the novel I currently am in. So 4/5 is a place holder until i further read. Some people have commented that the grammar improves further into the story so I hope it happens soon otherwise I don't want to read a novel where it feels like I am retaking the writing section on my SAT/ACT (ahhh those were some dark days..... state tests *shudders*)
the story and good even having some problems with grammar the biggest problem I have with history and unnecessary drama since it is not helping in any way the story and it is not helping in the development of Mc since he and an ***** I ended up talking about this with some friends who also follow this story many of them said they will not follow this story because of the drama they said that is leaving the story boring and that because of this is not worth spending your Spirit Stones I will see the next chapters to see if I will continue following the story
I really like sport stories especially when the story flow is good. This novel is nice because although it overpowers the mc a bit, it doesn't fully make him op. He faces challenges, he develops and he has limits. Although, his training doesn't seem to make him very human but I guess it's what made him become the best at basketball in his age. Also, the stability of updating, currently, is a good added bonus. With all that done and said, I do have to say that the grammar isn't good. I'm not expecting much but I atleast want to see even a little bit of an improvement. I don't want to pay 8-9 spirit stones for a work that doesn't flow smoothly due to its grammar. Especially, now that webnovel is stingy with free spirit stones and the big amount of new or old novels that go premium before it even reaches 100 chapters
Biraz daha bolum birikmesini bekliyorum sonra gonul rahatligiyla okuyacagim. Sen muhtesem bir yazarsin ve yazdigin kitap da muhtesem.🥰❤️ bu kitabi okumaya basladigimda asik olmustum ama bolumler guncellenmediginde de bi o kadar yikildim. O yuzden simdi guncellrnen bolumleri okumaya cesaret edemiyorum. Yorumlari okudugumda ve kotu yorumlari gordugumde acikcasi cok sasirdim cunku bu birinin patates kizartmasini sevmemesi gibi bir sey. Neyse kisaca umarim kitabi birakmassin ve devam edersin. Okumayi sabirsizlikla bekliyorum.
I am giving 1 star regarding all parts of novel as i have yet to even read till 10th chapter , why? cuz grammar is what matters the most for me personally, if u cant understand the words then how you will be able to say that novel was good blah blah blah etc without even understanding what is going on with the content , grammar in this is really bad , i am dropping this , sorry thats my opinion
A Good slice of life story to pass some time but a lot of incongruencies like the author wants us to believe that every regional state and national bb tournament is being held in miami and the ml doesn't need to travel at all. The writing quality sucks, like it's copied from lnmtl and edited a little to tell there is a difference.