I am now 70 chapters in and I have to say that this is a waste of time. No character building, no common sense (which I find is the worst trait of a novel) dude gets strong without doing anything. Stupid dialogs and many more problems... Don't read it if you want something fun
The story maybe good if read in its original language but the translated job is total garbage. The grammar is atrocious and things make no sense. This is at most a google translation with zero work on editing. I donβt suggest reading This at all.
Translation : Some errors there and then Update : Not slow nor quick ; stable Story development : It's quite the same every time (MC order his subordinate to kill/collect debts / treasure & talented people sign a contract and join the Bank) but the scale of things becomes bigger Character design : A bit of backstory (really not much) for some character but most of them won't be seen after a few chapters ; There's no real character development (people signing a contract for revenge and then becoming incredibly powerful and all aren't real character development) World Background : Not much is known ; the universe is made of Skied and Lands
I like the concept. I think the bank should let MC cultivate himself first and then use the watch to trade for his cultivation path. Such a waste for the good concept novel like this to be a slap face novel.
How come these type of trash novels are coming higher up in the ranking while the good ones are actually very less supported? The people liking these trash novels, haven't you read any better novels ever?If you did, you'd know the difference.
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The concept in this is a good one. The world background and all are quite good. But the translation doesn't match the background of that world. It might have been a good novel but translated versions being 'ef'ed by the translator is quite common in webnovel.
Superb story with great plot progression.it is one of those rare novel where plot doesn't just kind of repeat itself again and again.concept is creative.
This novel is absolutely amazing it caught my eye with this wonderful art and the storyline is so much better than some of the novels Iβve read it itβs too deep into everybodyβs conversation is absolutely very well-made οΏΌοΏΌ
Why is it rating only 4... Should be million/5... x
Rate this masterpiece higher people..
The first few chapter are decent and the premise could have been interesting but it all go to **** fairly quickly with the main character becoming stupidly op incredibly quickly. When you reach omniscience within 25 chapters that's dumb growth even for a cultivation webnovel. Add to that the atrocious translation and you end up with an incredibly disappointing book.
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This book is very confusing and weird, I like the concept but the execution is pretty bad. not going to lie, the first five chapters are pretty good, but after that it is pretty hard to follow, I read to around chapter 23 but I couldnβt take it any more so I stopped. It was as if there whole budget was spent on the first five chapters.
Short Title:BOTUOriginal Title:ζζδΈεΊ§ε€©ε°ι±εΊStatus:Ongoing708 Author:Girl Wears Short SkirtCountry:ChinaType:Web NovelGenre:Action,Β Adventure,Β Comedy,Β Romance,Β Xuanhuan Li Xiandao obtained the ancient Bank of the Universe but now the bank was totally empty and had no treasures at all. The only thing it had were a bunch of debts. β The Eternal Celestial King, borrowed a supreme celestial artifact and will pay back two pieces after 3,000 years. He will pay an additional piece for every 1,000 years after the expiry date! β Moon Celestial, loaned a high-quality face, returned after 10,000 years. If overdue, she will pay with her life! -Time Immemorial Sage loaned 10,000 years in life from the Bank of the Universe in order to break through. After he breaks through, he will pay back 10,000 years. If late, he must pay back ten times the amount! Li Xiandao looked at these debts and at the empty Bank of the Universe. He made his mind up to become a true expert, to find all these supreme beings to get back the overdue debts one by one! A powerless mortal had became the biggest creditor in the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands and even the entire Celestial World!
Interesting idea but it is clear that its content wont be better than your ever other Martial Arts book. The characters already show themselves to be of average quality. Please dont vote for this novel that 100 chapters later people with drop because it cant retail. Their attention.