Mountain Springs
I thought I'd like this story based on the premise but idk it's just off. The writings not the best at all not sure if it's the translating or just the writing in general and it always seems to be going a little to fast in it's pace not giving much detail or character depth. The FL and ML fall together way too quickly and he doesn't even question her 180 character change. She also act and speaks like a child to the point I would never believe she had 2 lives let alone 2 braincells. It's a shame.
This is based on 40 chapters & will include some spoilers. If you like a story where FL learns from her mistakes & after her rebirth decides to change, then this is the story for you. Not much is revealed about her relationship with ML before her rebirth, except that it was an arranged marriage (though it does seem as if he cared but not enough/didn't show it). So, aside from the abortion mentioned in the synopsis, we're not told that FL did all sorts of things to hurt her relationship with ML like we are told in other similar rebirth stories but we only know that she was distant. (It seems like the child was conceived out of duty one time rather than them having countless loving nights together. I'm not mentioning that to justify her action but simply stating something that readers may wonder about.) As expected, upon her rebirth, FL decides to attempt to try to have a relationship with ML & get revenge on those who hurt her. FL does have the power of telekinesis, though it doesn't make much of an appearance especially as the story progresses. What I like about this plan of hers to love ML & get revenge is that things don't feel too rushed as you read them. I think the relationship between her & ML is developing well. Also, unlike in most stories, her ex actually isn't trying to cause problems for her by chasing after her. I think it's a story worth giving a chance.
I love the plot, I love the story but the thing I hate in this is the FL being like a pushover. Her sister keeps targeting her but she's still being quiet and "waiting for the right time" as she said BUT this is stupid when she's getting hurt over and over again and keep falling by her sister's scheme. Her baby even put at risk because she's too complacent. She never learns and that's all there is. I will just read it again if the FL gain a little common sense and self-awareness. 🙂
really liked the overall Story. I felt the translation fell at times, esp towards the end. but I liked that for once, the ending wasn't rushed. there were a few things I thought should have been different, but I'm not the writer, So Mi is very caring but could be nasty at times. there was only 2 things that bothered me. I'll comment it, since it might be considered a spoiler ....
MY VERY HONEST REVIEW ABOUT 1.THE MOMENTS HAPPENED SO VERY FAST. 2.LACK OF CHARACTER DETAILS 3.THE FL ISN'T THAT LIKABLE CHARACTER AT ALL JUST AVERAGE. 4. I REALLY REALLY DON'T FEEL THAT THE FL DID REBIRTH. 5. THE FL AND ML DOESN'T GIVE A LOT OF CHEMISTRY AS A COUPLE. 6.SO MANY EXTRA CHARACTERS THAT GIVING BORING CHAPTERS. P.S I SKIP CHAPTER BECAUSE I GET BORED AND BECOME UNINTERESTED SOON TO THS NOVEL. THEN DROPPED. ( THE REVIEW OF THE OTHER READERS HERE R QUIET USELESS. R THEY PUSHOVER KIND OF READER OR WHAT?)
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