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Revelations @end of the world

Joyon

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Joyon
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Thank you everyone for your patience, this book is reviewed and completed. This is the second book in my story Revelations@end of the world. The third book, Conjurer@end of the world, will continue being uploaded here in the second book(For algo purposes) The third book will be released as a separate book soon, also free to read. Both the first and third book are free to read. They can be read independently from the other books if you wish. I've put in information and backstory to explain the missing plots from the previous book.

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Joyon
JoyonAuthorJoyon

Hi I've considered the suggestion of readers to incorporate a harem plot into the story line which would appear at around the end of the season. Hope you would enjoy the story with the new addition, Thanks for reading once again.

Lv13

Very Nicely written, noce development , good character building , celever Transition from sciencd to magic or maybe a mixture :) all in all a good reading experience,

mmymellonear_
mmymellonear_Lv1mmymellonear_

I really enjoyed reading your story. Your beautiful language style and detailed plot make this story quite complex. I've read a few chapters, and it's addicting me! excited for the next update.

Anony_Mous_1902
Anony_Mous_1902Lv3Anony_Mous_1902

I bet you can tell from the synopsis this would be a good story But wait until you read the first chapter, you'd be shocked at what you'll find! A GOOD BOOK! The description, the development, everything is just perfect! I love this book and I recommend it to everyone who wants to read Good job author😗

Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11Rayne_Rue

A good start Interesting chapters , I love everything about this book if you would ask , such an amazing author 💯reach for the stars this just excellent work really enjoyed reading the first chapters it's a book you wouldn't want to miss keep it up🌟

Joker_7
Joker_7Lv2Joker_7

The story is awesome and I believe that the start is quite great. Keep on writing.. I will be waiting for new chapters... The imagery can be improved a bit tho...

El_dorado
El_doradoLv2El_dorado

Hi, Good start! The synopsis is great! I believe that if continued, then it can go to great lengths... Keep up the work. The chapters are pretty interesting, I hope the author continues writing...

sadokocurry
sadokocurryLv3sadokocurry

the first part was good but the second part really shines. like caterpillar turn into butterfly. should release the second part first would gain more readers. first part need patience before mc character develops. Sayonara

DymenS
DymenSLv3DymenS

so far it's a good story. It's actually quite captivating, I love it.I would really love to see where the story goes. Keep it up author and carry on the good work

Poopy_Ahole
Poopy_AholeLv1Poopy_Ahole

The writing style and the plot of this novel are just flawless... The only problem I have with this novel is that there are only a few chapters to binge read...

Venusean
VenuseanLv2Venusean

The writing was good, albeit with some small, but noticeable grammar errors and awkward syntax(Grammarly helps for those.). The story, characters, and the world, all seem to be developing quite nicely into a story that has a focus on some sci-fi elements and fantasy ones, a combination that a lot of people are bound to like. Plot is also not messy or jumbled up, and instead, concise and simple to understand. Good work.

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_ValkyriaLv2Arc_Valkyria

The novel is really good and the story is well driven with this futuristic-science thingy on it. I will be coming back to read more of it. 💕

Rogue_Deity
Rogue_DeityLv2Rogue_Deity

the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention. just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content. overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece. just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.

Joyon
JoyonAuthorJoyon

Hi thanks for your review. Especially those who made multiple reviews over time. I dont know if its allowed in the server can anyone please enlighten me. Thanks again for your review.

Soleil_Lynx
Soleil_LynxLv1Soleil_Lynx

The book is overall a very good piece of work and is getting a good response in the growth in the views, the overall rating is also good. What a nice novel!

Hing_Chow
Hing_ChowLv2Hing_Chow

The beginning is pretty good,very well written novel. Has a great pacing,the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss.Keep it up.

sadokocurry
sadokocurryLv3sadokocurry

nice fusion of science and magic. Now latest revision got galactic battle. looks like a rewrite of star wars and jedi? make it good please. Thanks and Ohayo.

Cutiesweet
CutiesweetLv1Cutiesweet

A very interesting book. From the start I thought it was star wars then if became like magic. Maybe like Jedi in star wars. What do you think. Is force the magic?

KatyS
KatySLv2KatyS

Hi Mate, first time writing a review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. Thats my review. Bye.

Boani
BoaniLv2Boani

This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.