Joyon
Thank you everyone for your patience, this book is reviewed and completed. This is the second book in my story Revelations@end of the world. The third book, Conjurer@end of the world, will continue being uploaded here in the second book(For algo purposes) The third book will be released as a separate book soon, also free to read. Both the first and third book are free to read. They can be read independently from the other books if you wish. I've put in information and backstory to explain the missing plots from the previous book.
I bet you can tell from the synopsis this would be a good story But wait until you read the first chapter, you'd be shocked at what you'll find! A GOOD BOOK! The description, the development, everything is just perfect! I love this book and I recommend it to everyone who wants to read Good job authorđ
The writing was good, albeit with some small, but noticeable grammar errors and awkward syntax(Grammarly helps for those.). The story, characters, and the world, all seem to be developing quite nicely into a story that has a focus on some sci-fi elements and fantasy ones, a combination that a lot of people are bound to like. Plot is also not messy or jumbled up, and instead, concise and simple to understand. Good work.
the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention. just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content. overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece. just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.