Read the first ten chapters, and I can only say that it is executed perfectly. From the very start, you've set Elliot as this heaven-defying character that'll do anything to fight for his rights and fate. World Background is so perfect that it eclipses all other novels. The system is pretty good. Oh right, It is an artifact. Your originality surpasses all the top authors in web novels. All in all, this novel has a high potential of entering top 1.
It's good 😄😄 if you can tolerate the brainded mc, that is😅. I mean he is living his worst life and still can't see the true face of others , and who knows where, this girl who is his childhood friend came , who hadn't contacted since his childhood called him with his nickname ,only after seeing his results and made that girl in love with him since then ,bcs he's faced bully for her in childhood and our mc is really happy , that she remembers him😑😑😑😑😑
I would have given the author a five if the females where not power hungry thots, in the first few chapters some girl all of a sudden fell for mc cus he awakened a good ability. thats it i hate interactions like this, i wanna trash talk the author but i cant cus overall that is like the only problem in this novel.
Started of really good, but currently I hope that the mc's enemies will kill him, yeah I'm not kidding, I root for the bad guys when I read this. The reason is simple the Mc is so annoyingly arrogant that I want him to die. His arrogance is definitely not the good kind, where you can just pass it of as cringe, it's to the level that I hate the Mc. It would be one thing if he had something to base his arrogance on, but all that he has is the system, the system and nothing but the system. And his attempts to act all big and mature, make me cringe so hard that I want to vomit blood. If you want to read a book that will make you wish for a Age of Adepts ending this is your book.
Interesting story, but love interest characters make me want to puke. People are not horses, asking stranger to make baby with her (she never talk to him prior to that curse scene, I’m disturb) - just to ‘breed’ better offsprings is such a disgusting idea. (Worse, her father approved with that idea) What will happen to Mc (or children with high potential in general) if this idea become a norm? Would they kidnap them to ‘breed’ with other high potential women (that’s right, MANY women) just to get an army of high potential offsprings? A disturb idea indeed, consider most teachers and students around them was just staring in shock and envy at them, but not tried to interrupt and even feel that Mc’s rejection were abnormal…. Lol, I think this novel have interesting plot, but female charactors destroy it all. Read at your own risk.