Reviews of Autophagy
Autophagy
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Support is here! Keep writing and be successful. The cover photo of the story attracts attention. Boy, looks like he failed the exam xD Back in my kindergarten days, I went out 'post-exam. While my whole body was wet in the rain, I would stare lightly at the sky with my head at a 45-degree angle. Back then... It was my fast time.
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It is really well written horror story with unpredictable twists and mysteriuos background. While reading I couldn't shake the feeling of „Sweet Home“ but like in a good way, cause I liked that story very much too. It's definately not a copy or something like that, just a feeling like waiting for something scary or unpredictable to happen. I just couldn't put this story away until I read all 91 chapters so far and I'll be axiuosly waiting for more. So dear honourable Autor please give me more! ❤️❤️❤️
Really good story with developed world background. I don't remember seeing grammars problems. And the uptadatings are quit constant. Only hick is the Mc development: Even after 170 chapters we don't really know a lot about him. Sometime he is a little too perfect. We know what he want to accomplish but he doesn't look like to be in hurry about it. Which make the story slow paced. And more importantly (Spoiler Alert) The dreamscape whole feelings is quite bad. Let me explain. The system which is his Ability is not a lot used since its mostly blocked. Which is ok for me. But in the second DS it's not blocked completely so when he kills ghosts or things like this we should see a [log] from the system which we don't. And because of this it me us think there is not any interaction with the system. And knowing all this. The second dreamscape feel useless except for the Knoledge that he gets. The problems is that there is a LOT of fight scene where he get Nothing from them. Which make it boring. I mean like Buckingham palace... Men arf... Little advice do like The Oracle and its rewarding system. Give points and rewards from his achievements. Ex: Spoiler for The Oracle. In some of his ordeal the Mc is sent in the bodies of others or fake people. When this happen and he do well with his ordeal he can chose some of their special characteristic and send them to himself. Like this what he does seems more useful then a simple level up or just fighting knowledge.
Just giving this novel the rating it deserves. My only suggestion to the author would be to remove the notice saying that you are not a native english speaker as it both turns people away from the story which is an injustice considering how fantastically written the story is. Me to tge author after binge reading.
This novel is AMAZING 😳. A very very unique plot and a very terrifying cover. Forgive me, I'm a scaredy cat. I really liked the flow of the story and how natural and realistic the dialogues wrre. There was nothing much to complain about, the grammar was good and the author transitioned from scene to scene perfectly. Overall, this was excellent and certainly worth a read. [img=recommend]
writer has just finished the first book, so this is about chapter 198. overall I'd say there is a strong foundation for a good story to develop here. author has progressed character development pretty well and the main character is pretty likeable(wouldn't say he's amazing in that he has any features that make him stand out but fortunately the main character doesn't make ridiculous decisions that should never work out and instead progresses slowly and he slowly learns about the world around him), one thing I'm impressed with is that the author isn't worried about killing characters, instead of all characters having plot armour, yhis story so far really feels like it's a tough struggle to survive in his world. tbh I've read alot of books and hate most of them or get bored. can't say this story is perfect or anything, but it's definitely grabbed my attention and I'd say it's worth checking out. also mc has a system which is pretty standard, fortunately while the system is good and useful it doesn't exactly feel like it's the sole focus and reason for the mc's existence like most books. check it out guys 🤙🤙
