Jaxsin
The amount of thought in this novel shocks me, I thought it was going to be a generic dark Mc Fanfic. I was wrong. Though I don't really like the cover photo for the book, that is my only reservation. Yes it is a dumb reason, but that is how nitpicky I have to be to throw shade on this novel. Aside from obvious grammar and regular vocabulary this is an amazing novel~ Give it a quick read and try to enjoy it as much as possible. I managed to instantly fall in love with it.
Its interesting but i hope this will try to be realistic..ie: Bakugo is hated..no forgiveness or some****...in this fanfic MC life is **** so hopefully he wont be some bitchy MC...also if this is a villian...make him someone who has a purpose and not a nut that just causes chaos..ex: he wants power..he wants to help quirkless people through underhanded methods...etc...try to make him a bit dark...no psyco...Make him OP..OP MC's are always dope...also for romance do built it..and no love at first sight **** and just dont make this some sad angsty tragic ****..keep the romance happy and fluff...if harem keep it small..romantic intrests: mei or melissa..BASH characters but dont make them saints..its bull..people hate this ****..either completely bash them and kill em or just dont bash em at all...Also make MC save ERI....anyway goodluck and goodshow/.....just dont make it an idiotic Midoriya fanfic like the rest of em.. **: is this a B x B..cause many of them these days are....
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This is, by far, one of the best villain deku fanfic I've ever read. There were some that tried but failed There was this one fanfic that tried to make deku "infiltrate" UA as a student where he even helped todoroki with his daddy issues and bakugou with his stupid pride. NONE OF THAT HERE. Instead, in this fanfic, we get a true villain. Not some villain-wannabe edge Lords .
Update with a decent amount of chapters like around 10 with at least 20 pages each and people will actually start to read your story, other than that don't drop it and keep up the good work it's just that people don't tend to read novels on here without alot of chapters as this website encourages binge reading.