Photosphere
I have enjoyed the story a lot. Everything flows well and is easy to read. One thing I'm confused about is how the characters get stronger. I don't know if I'm missing something or if it just hasn't been revealed yet. I also hope that this doesn't become a harem. I don't want to see the mc with a bunch of girls. Overall the story is well written and I would highly recommend it.
The world building and attention to detail in this novel is amazing! Seriously, reading was intriguing and like a mini adrenaline rush at times! Especially in the first chapter. It's been a long time since I've been so invested in a book so early! What I truly appreciated was that the world detail didn't stop after that point though. The author continued to create both suspense and a vivid picture as we continued. The spelling and grammar were also great, which obviously goes a long way in holding the flow of the story.
First thing first I love this book so far. Unless I missed some there have been no grammatical errors, while there are some strange events the story development is fluid and well put together and so is the character development there hasn't been too much yet as there only 4 chapters done at the time of this review. Because of how little there chapters are at the moment I can't say anything about the update stability. In terms of the world back ground I don't know much about it because the story hasn't progressed far enough, but after 20 or so chapters I'll come back and update this review. All in all I hope you guys try out this book and have a wonderful reading experience.
I think this book is very creative for this world. But also, it's VERY FAST PACES. Now thst isn't a bad thing, especially for a fantasy book with real world elements. I think if this book was on chapter 5nI eould say it has a lot of potential, but now it's obvious this book has grown to be something big.
Welp, the first chapter was intense enough as it is. He had done so much for the world yet as he is supposed to have met his end, a new and much dangerous world awaited him. Anyhows, I could somehow connect Stain and the Octopus teacher from Assasination classroom to the MC. Octopus teacher because of his Top Assassin origin story while Stain due to hid extreme ways of purging the stains of the world.
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