Assassination System

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This is an original novel, although some elements are a bit inspired by other novels. But there's something that bothers me: Each skill consumes a fixed percentage of Qi. For example the skill 'Stealth' that costs 10% Qi. It's good in the first chapters, but when the MC advances, even the consumption would increase, right? Example: with 100 'units' of Qi it would cost 10 but if he had 1million 'units' of Qi he would need 100k ?

At first you think it would be cliche trash but once you get into it you realize that despite the plot which is cliche its a lot better than most other just like it

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Has a nice design and fun to read. The plot has a okay build up and could be nicer if you had more character development but dont regard this comment to much I've only read one chapter.

Left after reading starting chapter's. Mc suddenly becomes all knowing powerful person.his actions are kind of stupid.he is able to kill assassin's when he is trash .. no background about cultivation.dont know about the later chap but from what i read story disappoints.

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I read only until chapter 3, I admit that compared to the amount of current chapters is nothing, but the story still seems horrible to read. If I had taken this story when I started reading novels, it would be interesting even, but now ... most of the story is just a thought flow, altor jumps when he wants, a few hours goes extremely fast where you wonder how you got there. There, I do not say that the work is bad, only that it has many loopholes. I can’t read, bye.

I really can't recommend this to anyone. The story is so fast paced that there are no explanations on where everything comes from. Honestly, I just read a dozen or so chapters and just said, enough is enough. Mc was a weeb in his past life then couple of chapters in, becomes a cold blooded killer out of nowhere. I mean, I could understand if mc was trained to fight or kill in his previous life, but no, he just died cause he freakin had a heart attack reading his own novel.

There are a lot of really obvious writing mistakes. Incorrect usage of he/she him/her litter the story making it hard to follow along who the writer is referring to. Pacing isn’t great. Feels like author is trying to force a different style of mc character growth that a lot of times just doesn’t make sense with the tools that surround the main character and how smart everyone around him seem to be it feels like a lot of just stupid thoughts concerning how to train the mc. Characters development seems good at first glance but then some pretty weird writing makes you wonder why the characters just seem so dumb at times for no reason especially around mc growth. How writer handles mc growth is biggest issue for me because he has so many tools (system and strong characters surrounding him) but isn’t smart enough to use the system to actually learn how to get stronger on his own or actually get training until he is forced by 1 character. Overall story feels good but with some glaring issues in what I feel like is just forced writing and really bad editing (grammar) I can’t enjoy it as much as I would like to.

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It’s not that good. Character development is lower than average. Don’t know how the system work to bring boom and gun in this kind of world

Marami pang kailangan iimprove bro, specially sa interaction ng mga characters. Masyadong mabilis ang buildup ng story, natatabunan yung mga important references. And nagiging overpowered na ang mc pero ung progress nya pilit. Pero bro ganda ng plot mo. Ung buildup lang talaga, goodluck and kaya yan. Wag masyadong magfocus sa harem or sa ibang characters. Nawawala ka kasi. Hahaha pero good job. Kaya pa yan.

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Great story love the characters in interaction with each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This story is going great I like the herme that being built four at the most one must be Charlotte also please have the system stop giving him modern wepons he's in a cultivation word give him a section building app in his system great work thx

Since this novel has become contracted, it is high time for me to bestow my review. I will be completely honest as silent as a lurker that I am. Let's start with the disadvantages - Sudden Romance Development - MC doesn't use the System that much. - Author's verbose writing style. - MC's personality is somewhat strange, maybe because Earth's culture and his current world's culture is different. Advantages + Great Character Development + MC Is not a retard, finally a novel where the mc isn't brain-dead. + Calculative MC and Scheming Wife[What a combo!] + Chapters are as long as my essay for my finals before that degree. Overall, the novel is quite great but it seems like people are judging it because of the first thirty chapters which were quite weird, I do hope that everyone who finds that part as strange, gives this novel a chance since the author himself explained that as he improves, the novel also improves and we, as readers should believe that.

Anyone able to access the chapters here or is it just me.…......…………….......................................................................

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