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Assassination System

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TheAdventurer
TheAdventurerAuthorTheAdventurer

Do you want to read a System Story with an MC that learns about the world and develops along with it? Do you want to read an MC that grows along with the author? Then, you came into the right place, just go read the first chapter, already!

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Skully_
Skully_Lv13Skully_

I have had this issue in the past. It does demotivate you when people unfairly rate your work. Me. My problem is sometimes someone says something in comments. I disagree. And then one minute after they read my reply rate my story 1* due to butthurt. At least on WN you can respond to reviews. On WN Power Stones are what rates a novel. This is an awesome system because haters can do nothing to affect the stones you get. People who like you, give you stones. On RR you can be pulled down by haters. It cannot happen here. So... given the fact that haters cannot pull you down. You can approach negative comments in two ways. 1) be super nice. Say they are right with everything and you will try and improve taking on board their sage advice. OR 2) Troll the **** out of them. Seriously what can they do? not give you power stones? Guess what your fans will love it. So Far chicken Skully has been super nice. But...I haven't run into any ****turds yet.

Shantanu
ShantanuLv4Shantanu

I like the fact that circumstances are pushing him to abandon his emotions, but it slightly irks me how powerless the MC is in all sorts of situations. He's literally being punched around by the world as of now. Please give him a nice and fluffly romance to settle down, the boy has been scarred from the betrayals~

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

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EmreXeno77
EmreXeno77Lv5EmreXeno77

good, but need more harem :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

SteveWN
SteveWNLv14SteveWN

Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more. Points for the story None for the design

Ube
UbeLv4Ube

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Theblazedraider
TheblazedraiderLv13Theblazedraider

Gave it a 1 star rating for the sole reason that they said that One Piece would come to a end. One Piece will never end, and for spouting such blasphemy you get 1 star sir. Otherwise great novel but you really crossed the line.

Perfect_It
Perfect_ItLv12Perfect_It

I can't suggest you read this. The characters are two-dimensional, villains and the MC both. The MC is an idiot suggested to be a clever reincarnated human from Earth however. He's using an assassination system however the novel we thought we'd get, after about 25 chapters devolves into a 'RUTHLESS ASSASSIN MC' falling for a divorced woman with a daughter used as a sex slave and made powerful for no god damn reason.

striker45
striker45Lv13striker45

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Eddicted
EddictedLv5Eddicted

Calling it an absolute trash is an insult to the word trash. If you want to know why read it and experience the pain first hand ..........................................................................................

Slav_Joe
Slav_JoeLv11Slav_Joe

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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6Jack_Priper

Yeah...... I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this. Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics." Bye bye Apologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted. Lallalalalalalalalalalalalala I think that ought to do it

One_Who_Seeks
One_Who_SeeksLv4One_Who_Seeks

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LonelyChili
LonelyChiliLv6LonelyChili

At least you put more twist in the story.. later i guess after this arc.. that will be cool if there is an assassin system.. there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc... that will be more diffuclt i guess...... but continue the hardwork...

Jus7aguy
Jus7aguyLv14Jus7aguy

I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential. It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!! The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution. Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on. On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning. He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.

Meowmeowpeow
MeowmeowpeowLv11Meowmeowpeow

This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the β€œpromised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it) TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.

fitacrackers
fitacrackersLv4fitacrackers

-game elements, system, assassination skills, blessed by the gods, *** maniac -from being an otaku, reincarnated in a hedonistic young master of the strongest general of the empire after being beat to death -his *** maniac comes from the life of the previous young master, instead of cultivating martial arts he learn carnal knowledge and practice cultivation to help his stamina in bed

kamehgahskiida
kamehgahskiidaLv11kamehgahskiida

This is not a review,perhaps? Lol i just want to recommend this story . It has a great potential , Not overpowered at all but still the protagonist had enough of power to beat bad guys and tame beauty(ies?) As the MC is growing up the flow also make every chapters become interesting.

Devin_Lin
Devin_LinLv4Devin_Lin

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