MonarchX
I think the story is really good and i like the characters. But it starts really generic but i have noticed it gets better down the line. So if you’ve just Started Reading this please continue to about chapter 6 or 7. (P.S I like the idea of him being a Sushi Chef please keep that in if the author is reading this.)
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Great story so far! World is interesting and at least reasonably developed so far, the MC is a bit emo for me, but has some cute naive moments too, though some might dislike bc he occasionally (rarely IMO) feels like a beta MC. The story development is fast and because the grammar is so good, feels super easy to read, and its also not boring. Also, i love sushi and am perhaps unreasonably thrilled that the story includes lots of sushi in it! All in all, a decent read that isnt out of this world for me, but feels light and fun and works well to pass the time :)