Reader Notice(Please Read!!)

So now I have been re reading the previous chapters and I noticed a few problems.

1. The story has been going slowly, Even with the chapter that I haven't released the novel has been going slowly. And with those who feel like this,this will only happen for Volume's 1 things pick up pace towards the end of this volume. I have big things planned for this novel so please be patient.

2. Incoherent Writing: Also a problem and a few other readers have noticed about plot holes and things that don't make sense. Yes I admit that while there have been a few writing errors from typos to minor plot holes. Please do not be worried I will fix them and try to be a better author please do consider I am a relatively new author. And if people are truly not happy I will be glad to rewrite the novel. I have planned to do a rewrite anyway after I have finished volume one. While it might not be a full rewrite I do plan on some sort of editing.

3.MC: So far Mahald's writing might see me subpar or that he isn't Actively doing enough despite having such a great head start. It is significantly harder to write a character that is as smart as he is without it being logically inconsistent and there is also the problem of the character themselves being to smart in that case there isn't really much of a story except an OP MC power fantasy and that's not the kind of novel I want to write.

And for some of the flaws Mahald displays please note that they are out there intentionally I am trying to make him as human as possible which again is hard when you have given him the intelligence of a God. But I will try my best to capture and portray the image and idea of him in my head.

4.Tensura World Building: I wanted to pick a world that was not too weak to start out. A world where the Mc would actually feel pressured by death coming around the corner whenever so that he will be forced to grow and put his intelligence to use. And another thing is I wanted to write about a section of the world of Tensura that was not talked about much. The humans. While we got some info about them from Rudra, Hinata and Yuuki they were really the only link we had to the human side of the tensura world. So I decided to write on the Eastern Empire rather than on Tempest which everyone has seen. Now there is the problem about writing the Eastern Empire even in the LN they weren't really explained that much like how their army was formed or how the power system and ranking system within the army works. So for those parts I had to improvise and come up with a way to fit it into the story without making it seem out of place.

5:Powerstones,Collections,Reviews and Comments: Yes I understand everyone wants to just read a good story but to that that I need your help too. Every power stone you drop on the novel boosts us in the rankings this exposing us to more readers which means more feedback. Feedback I use to better myself as an Author. So please add to your Library and give some powerstones to the novel it serves as motivation also to enable to write better to at least see I have been doing well and to those who have been doing so so far I appreciate you guys. You are the reason I write. Now for reader feedback I need reviews and comments they don't have to be positive while a 5star review would be gold say whatever you want to say it helps me get better as a writer. Like in one of my earlier chapters a user commented how he did not like the dialogue which is perfectly ok this novel isn't for everyone but since then I have been watching youtube videos on how to write better dialogue and character interactions so all your feedback helps in one way or the other.

So in conclusion Power stones and reviews will be helpful and I will try my best to write a story you can all enjoy.

Next Chapter:Friday(Should be a fairly long one I think)