Eva_Smith_0875
Strengths: The story is lit! I am impressed with how my emotions were played like an instrument. Narration is also good and without obvious errors. I like the MC, she's brave π pacing is good, and grammar is good π Weakness: Your synopsis is all over the place. It needs to talk about your novel and works as well as promote your work. Key points that the readers need to look forward to and as well as omit the confusing and unnecessary info. Welp, you're good to go! Have a nice day π