TheIllusionist
Read the first eight chapters, and all I can say is "I want more!" It is refreshing to see a ********, badass female lead.. Keep it going author. I am hooked in this novel just like in arrrange marriage: to hear your voice novel. I am intrigued about what happened in their past, what happens in the present and what will be their future .. I highly recommend this novel... π
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Just reading i know this will be an awesome book to read..as i have read this author's other book there will be no disappointment..i like bad kick ass female lead and a loving doting male lead..im sure this story is explosive..π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦π¦β€β€β€π¦β€π¦β€β€β€π¦β€π¦β€π¦β€β€π¦β€π¦πππππ
I like the story BUT.. you must rectify your mistakes. 1. The story Is too fact paced making the story very unrealistic. π 2. The character background should be much more solid 3. I don't like the fact that he's harassing her and she's letting him do it. I would like if the FL has a strong character who embraces her weaknesses.π€ I like that she is from a military background 4. The Male lead must do some serious grovelling to do , before marriage is highly appreciated π Please don't misunderstand this review, I hope you you will improve and give us good book. All the best!πβ€
So let's start off whit a simple truth, what the synopsis promises u would not get (reading the first 20 chapters) , after the first 2 chapters u get a useless fl that is always need of saving (so much for strong an independent woman) a damsel in distress and used as a toy buy her family and accept everything without reason (and i know u don't need logic for this kind of books but still...), and the Ml that knows he messed up but still only after her body nothing more (since he apers he just wants to get in her pantis) he does not have integrity jus self pitty and a really messed up story line without any conclusion or detail. I would say this looks more like a scratch than a novel. sorry author for the bad review but that's my personal opinion
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I have read ur other book many months ago and its awesome..... But I wanted to ask u author one question as I read the synopsis ,this .....is this the sequel for 'arrange marriage to hear ur voice '??? Also andromeda mondragon is the sister of sabrina mondragon....if it is then thankyou very much cause I wanted her part of the story as well which was not In that book..... I haven't started reading it that's why I wanted to write this review