I like the author's sense of humor, and also his nationalism. I look forward for this book! There are some mistakes but why bother, this will serve as your practice. Also, I like the way the author kinda breaks the fourth wall hahahah, and the references of such popular games making the imagination run better. It's has a nice story and I expect more from this, keep it up!
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